Very neat concept; however, the dragons don't really reflect that of a charitable club. Also, more emphasis needs to be put on the 'FOCUS' text. Could you try a different approach to this? I'd love to keep the abstractness though. I think you could pull off something very nice. I really love what you did with the 'O' in FOCUS; I think we should keep that. Also - if possible, could you add in the 'Federation of Charitable University Students' slogan somewhere? I know it may be too much to ask, but the logo would be perfect if it had the slogan as well. Hmm, still not sure if I'm really feeling it. The shapes just don't seem relevant. ----- UPDATE: Here's an idea guys. Because we have 3 words in the logo 'Asian FOCUS Laurier,' why not create a logo based on creative positioning of the 3 words? Here are some examples of what I mean by creative positioning of the words. @Pixobox & @vicky786: Please see above.
Ok, the top entries so far are (in no particular order): http://i.imgur.com/dtTC60P.jpg http://i.imgur.com/wiRJZkq.png http://imageshack.us/a/img571/8216/o43.png For the 1st one, I really like the abstractness, the 'O' in FOCUS (a ninja's face), and the curviness of the fonts. For the 2nd one, I really like how the 'Asian' text is positioned on the 'FOCUS' text and it includes all text pieces (including slogan). For the 3rd one, I like the simplicity and modern, professional look. Can somebody combine what I like in all 3 logos and try making a final logo that contains all the elements I like? I feel like we're really close here. I want to retain an abstract look, but at the same time I want the 'FOCUS' emphasized. And I'd love to keep a ninja's face in the 'O' in 'FOCUS' - or something else that's neat.