Contest $30 Logo Contest - fashion clothing brand!

hi here is my entry....

 

OK, my feedback for today:

natali77 - This attempt is better. I actually didn't notice this gradient, .. But the text seems to be a little bit empty without a symbol. Can you also pleas widen the font a little bit to allow more space between letters.

me2_me2 - the symbol is not proportional to the main brand name. It doesn't look so much appealing with this imaginative crown.

Skaritza - this is what I call it a good hit, which means a first time strong work. Well done. Can you please try with different fonts for the main brand name (maybe LondonMM). Please also balance tagline with the brand name. I am not 100% convinced into the symbol shape. you need to look for other options to find optimum which suits the brand.

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Tip for the designers willing to add a symbol to the logo (if designed creatively then it change a total perception of the brand.. Positively indeed).

So.. Hayes, me2_me2, logoesdesign, Skaritza, jaga deep:
Please play a little bit with the font Paris pro or maybe similar, I like the high end touch from this.
And this is for your inspiration for the symbol shape, please try to make it more sophisticated than just straight "R":



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Based on your work and lack of creativity especially in the early days. I have decided to extend this contest to 2 more days.
Tomorrow please post your changed work or a new work then please finish your designs on Monday. On Tuesday, I will judge your finished work.

I hope that is "ok" with forum regulations.

 

hi this is my entry... the 'R' in the icon is almost similar to 'paris pro' which i manually made...hope you'll like it...


or take a look at this one....

 

Hi there!

Feedback for today:
natali77 - Natali, there is no consistency in every design line. R is decorative and it could work if you do experiment and replace R from RUUCI with that decorative R (but i am not 100% sure about this).

jaga deep - i will tell you straight, this connection doesnt work.

vicky786 - there is something in your design which i like.. and that's a first letter R in Ruuci. symbol doesnt work very well with the brand name and tagline.

Skaritza - well thought designs, glad that you actually re-thought your idea and made it more classy.

1) I actually thought that this is a small "r" in the square.
the symbol is too heavy, and changes the eye-view from the brand name. If you could make it lighter (make it more transparent or whiten colours on up-downs and R stroke as well).

2) Design no.2 is the most classy and i really like it and my wife too. i like the aesthetic feeling of this design, very well done on this one. (if you could make it maybe smaller a little bit, but this is cosmetic change"), a strong attempt, well done.

3) Design no. 3 - it doesn't work very well. it might be a shape. maybe a different shape? (or maybe without any border?.. different options to consider). and if this is a small "r" then i dont see this well.

4) This design is not so appealing as design no. 2.. a small change but totally different feeling and perception.

5) Similar opinion as design no. 3.. it is something wrong with the shape.

I like your creativity, please surprise me tomorrow again!
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Well done... to all the designers involved！

The last day tomorrow to surprise or to finish the designs if you believe that these are your best possible versions.

I have got some favorites from not only one designer

 

A short revision of your new/updated designs:

vicky786 - The design looks too modern, i want this to be more classic emphasizing about premium style. When logo is on the shopping bag, then it doesn't have any connection to the brand name.

Your last design changed completely the idea of some corrections i asked you to make. it is too bold now and too heavy now.

me2_me2 - you are continuing with the circle as symbol so i assume that you are finishing your final design. In this connection, especially on the clothing tag, it will not work.. the same problem as with vicky786's design.

natali77 - this concept has some potential to explore, although you need to fill the space in the circle, as there is too much space there.

Skaritza - Interesting designs again,
1.) If you change the angle of the square slightly, the same as your design no.2 from yesterday. i believe, it could be more appealing.
2) your second design is much complex, too difficult to pass the message and brand recognition is too complicated for the customer to remember easily.

Skaritza, please also work on your existing designs and edit them according to my comments.

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To all the designers:

Please don't forget about taglines, main colours (magenta font on the white background) and logotype on the clothing tag, thanks.