Bigger text, smaller pets, more integrated in the theme. I've tried with the pinks but it didn't look good
Definitely much better. I don't really like the way you put .com in there. In general, though, the logo seems to be off in terms of symmetry. I'd like to see what you can do to tweak this a little more. Also I'm awaiting Crowquills submission. People please don't be discouraged to submit more designs - if I see more than one I like I will be glad to pay for it in addition to the winner.