Contest $30 logo contest 48 Hours

One more SIMPLE entry, COMMENTS APPRECIATED,

 

Thank you for your reply, I'll start working on the revision soon.

Regards,

Bucko

 

Revised :

 

I gave this a try.

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Hmm.

 

Working on it.

 

Hello,

my revisions are attached. Did you have something like this in mind?
About the building: it's hard to make it fancier without loosing the overall simple feel, and when I tried to include utensils inside the building they just seemed to small. So I did a little reduction I can still work on the building if you odn't like this version.

Feedback is appreciated.

Thank you,

Bucko

 

My Entry:

 

Razi31
Comment on post #23
Sorry this is just to cartooney for my client.
They are afraid that this image would keep them from being taken seriously by those who want a restaurant designed by them.
I hope you give it another try
Thanks
Leland

 

Mr. LeGeNd
Feedback on Post #27
I like the concept but the building is way to elementary and the hand has too much detail.
Stylizing both in stead of cartooning would be good. Also no one has offered a logo hand with the hand pointed with fingers toward the viewer.(as if handing the building to the viewer) This could possibly set you above the other hand entries. Also the building does not have to be in the hand. It could be over the hand.
Thanks
Leland

 

Feedback on post #28
Cristiano18
Your proposal seems to be for a restaurant not for a restaurant designing and supplying company.
Thanks
Leland

 

i'm going to remake it . wait for my reply please

 

changed the hat . FEEDBACK PLEASE

 

Any feedback on mine? Fonts, colors?

Thanks,

Bucko

 

Feedback on post #34
Ighy
The head still looks like an egg. Maybe the Atlas including the head can be darker or some color besides white.
Thanks
Leland

 

Feedback on Post #26
Bucko
I like what you have and gave it to my client. I would like for you to replace the top hand with one just like the bottom one only palm down. This will give the impression like wrapping the building in hands. I think that would give my client more of what he is after. Plus it would be so easy and have one extra chance at being selected.
Thanks

 

Ok, I'll revise it as soon as possible.

Thank you,

Bucko

 

Your logo proposal got me to thinking. What if the person holding the plate was some how a designer holding on his/her platter the world of food. This could be represented by a chefs hat on the world or even a roof with a silverware to left and right of the world like it was a plate. I don't know how you could create a designer, maybe a guy with a suit and tie???????

 

Hi,

my revisions are in attachment. I tried to play around with the ''tratoria'' feel as you can see on the top but I'm afraid the details are not as visible as I'd like them to be... Do you know the wanted height/width ratio? The text is there just to get the overall feel of the logo, if your customer has any preferences about the text we can adjust it, colours and setting also.

Feedback appreciated, as always.

Thank you,

Bucko.