Contest $30 Header Contest Easy

Discussion in 'Design Contests' started by silvastar, Jul 18, 2010.

  1. silvastar

    silvastar Active Member

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    #21
    Prine L: Great work. Love the smooth lines. Love teh writing although the name could be bigger and I'd like to see it looking like a web address with capital R G * P as in 'RockhamptonGolfPro.com' You do need to get rid of the golf course in the backgroud as mentioned above. The phone number is sort of just hanging there but I can see that in this particular image it there isn't much more room elsewhere.

    vaibhavmeswani: 7:55pm - get rid of golf course background. REd line adds pretty good effect but I like the flowing curved lines of Prince L so feel free to 'round it up a bit'. On the phone number side of it I really like the green and/or black you used on your designs at 6:06pm.
     
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  2. silvastar

    silvastar Active Member

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    #22
    Note to all: No more golf courses in the background as it is not the Rockhampton golf course so it doesn't make sense to include some other golf course.
     
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  3. Sabarisathish

    Sabarisathish Peon

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    #23
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  4. silvastar

    silvastar Active Member

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    #24
    Sabarisathish: Yes that is simple. I don't want a golf course in the background as it is not the Rockhampton golf course. It doesn't make sense to include a random golf couse. Golf balls in the logo are not the effect I am looking for. Nice clean, crisp, professional writing. These are golf professionals we are talking about. The phone number on the right needs to stand out more, perhaps on its own tab for a background. Thanks for your entry.
     
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  5. vaibhavmeswani

    vaibhavmeswani Well-Known Member

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    #25
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    CGdesigns Active Member

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    #26
    revising after reading last feedback ...
     
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  7. silvastar

    silvastar Active Member

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    #27
    vaibhavmeswani: Your image without the golf course in the background is much better. Thanks for being the first one to post taking into account that particular request. The golf ball must be WHITE. Golf professionals only play with white golf balls, not green. Phone image is a little bit over the top. Just a basic phone is fine. Your post number11 had an excellent color scheme on the phone side of things. Stick with that. I don't like the yellow/khaki color that much. The writing gets a little washed out across the right hand side of teh driver with the white text. Also the .co should be .com and the M would be white on the white tee if you kept that color. Does that make sense?
     
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  8. damoolag

    damoolag Well-Known Member

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    #28
    my Try:
    NOTE: I use the real RackhamptonGolf Course...^_^

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  9. silvastar

    silvastar Active Member

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    #29
    CGdesigns: Love it. I like the flowing edges and the style. I like the phone number and the text on the left hand side. That is a stand out. Your text on the right could be improved, see 'note to all' below. I like the font style you are using where it says 'play the best golf of your life' so please keep that style. It is possible to use a more vibrant color than grey? Perhaps a strong blue or sky blue or something else. Grey is just a little dull but I really love your design so far.

    NOTE to all: Try using different colors for teh web address 'RockhamptonGolfPro.com' Have Rockhampton in one color and 'Golf Pro' in another as its a long web address. It needs to be broken up.
     
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    CGdesigns Active Member

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    #30
    so can i keep the golf course?
     
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  11. silvastar

    silvastar Active Member

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    #31
    Damoolag: I was wondering when you were going to submit an entry. Nice. The lady works. See comments above regarding font color on rockhamptonGolfPro.com. Your text 'play the best...' is washed out a little with that skinny font style. To be honest I don't like Rockhampton golf course so please stick to my comment of 'NO GOLF COURSE IN BACKGROUND'. I do appreciate you making the effort of grabbing that image though. The fading green near the phone is a little 'weak' and I think it needs a strong color and more defined lines. Not with a glow edge.
     
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  12. damoolag

    damoolag Well-Known Member

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    #32
    @Silvastar - copy that! ^_^
     
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    silvastar Active Member

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    #33
    CGdesigns: Unfortunately I cannot have the golf course in the background. It's just not going to work for 2 reasons. 1 - It's not rockhampton golf course and 2 - Rockhampton Golf Pro's don't necessarily use the rockhampton golf course. There are driving ranges nearby that they use, so a golf course is not fitting in this instance if you know what I mean.
     
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  14. debayanmitra

    debayanmitra Well-Known Member

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    #34
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    Gladiatus Well-Known Member

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    #35
    working on my entry now
     
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    debayanmitra Well-Known Member

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    #36
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    damoolag Well-Known Member

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    #37
    Revisions:

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    #38
    Please don't close the contest yet, will submit my entry in ~1hour
     
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  19. silvastar

    silvastar Active Member

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    #39
    Codehunter: Look forward to your entry.

    Debayanmitra: Not sure what it is but it's not the effect I am looking for. The font style isn't as clean and crisp as I'd like it. I like text that is easy on the eye to read. The images used on the left aren't particularly what I'm looking for.
     
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  20. vaibhavmeswani

    vaibhavmeswani Well-Known Member

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    #40
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