Contest $30 business card & stationary design

Discussion in 'Design Contests' started by Tori0n, Dec 17, 2013.

  1. #1
    Hey guys,
    I’m looking for a design for a business card and stationery.
    The design I’m looking for is very clean, original and professional.
    Color scheme is black, white and #57c5f0.
    And the rest I’m leaving up to you guys :)
    Have fun and be creative, I'll try to give as much feedback as possible.
    I hope to see lots of different designs and might also be willing to buy other concepts that I like so there might be a second or third place winner but we will work that out individually. logo1.jpg logo2.jpg

    Contest will run for 72 hrs
    Payment instant by Paypal
    Have fun
     
    Tori0n, Dec 17, 2013 IP
  2. biili

    biili Well-Known Member

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    #2
    Hi

    Can you give us the logo in psd, ai, or png version?
     
    biili, Dec 17, 2013 IP
  3. Tori0n

    Tori0n Well-Known Member

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    biili Well-Known Member

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    #4
    ty i will be back with the design
    btw about the stationery what do you need?
    letterhead
    Envelope design
    Or all of them?
     
    biili, Dec 17, 2013 IP
  5. Tori0n

    Tori0n Well-Known Member

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    #5
    yes both envelope and letterhead
     
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    kferguson Well-Known Member

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    kferguson, Dec 17, 2013 IP
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    biili Well-Known Member

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    #7
    [​IMG]

    For now here is the business card design , let me know what are you think about it so i can continue to design the rest
     
    biili, Dec 17, 2013 IP
  8. Tori0n

    Tori0n Well-Known Member

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    #8
    @kferguson: I like some elements, like how the card is rounded to resemble the D of BeterDesign and same goes for the white shading behind "designer but". Don't like the white shading behind "BeterDesign" and the blue shading around the edge. Overall the look isn't clean enough.
    @biili: Very nice, love the contrast and the clean look. Need to tweak it tough, so it doesn't resemble our last project so much. Try different icons and font for contact info.
     
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    biili Well-Known Member

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    #9
    [​IMG]
     
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    pehulz Notable Member

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    #10
    my try
    betercard.jpg
     
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  11. Tori0n

    Tori0n Well-Known Member

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    @biili: I showed your concept to my partner and he loved the front, I think this would also look great on stationary, but he isn't to keen on the contact side.
    @pehulz: Great work, really like the white arround the D in the logo on the white card. Could you change the font of the contact info to something that resembles the one of "Design" in the logo? Also dig the idea of a black and a white edition of the business cards, just a thought though.
     
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    biili Well-Known Member

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    #13
    Hi,
    Do you mean like this one? i change the font on the contact.
    betercard.jpg
     
    pehulz, Dec 17, 2013 IP
  14. Tori0n

    Tori0n Well-Known Member

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    @pehulz: Yes, I did a little alteration myself
    betercard (1).jpg
    @biili: I like to see some more variations of the contact side

    Sorry guys I'm really pressed for time, I wil get back to you asap
     
    Tori0n, Dec 17, 2013 IP
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    pehulz Notable Member

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    @Tori0n hahahaha you're talented too :) yeah that's better with some color variations to the bar :D
     
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    biili Well-Known Member

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  17. Tori0n

    Tori0n Well-Known Member

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    #17
    Feedback's overdue, it's late and I'm tired so don't mind if I'm a little incoherent
    Well Pehulz and Biili certainly raised the bar on this one, and we are quite happy with their work, but like I said there might be more than one payout here! I would like to encourage other designers to enter our competition, you don't have to win to be a winner. We would like to familiarize ourselves with different designers and are planing to post more contests her on DP.

    @pehulz: Yeah I got a real talent when it comes to messing up other people's work :) I'm thinking of giving this one a metro feel, maybe loose the watermark to clean it up and add some squared (metro) icons. Needs a little more tweaking but would like to see some stationary.
    @biili: me and my partner really liked the leather look on number 3 in revision 2 (we where already discussing how to emboss it :)) but unfortunately BeterDesign targets lower end of the market so we'll keep it in mind, just not for BeterDesign. My partner liked the rectangular look in revision 1, but feels the back side is out of sync. We both liked number 1 in revision 2, maybe invert black/white on the contact side or raise the separation so there's more white. We would like to see some stationary following that design to.
     
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    Tori0n, Dec 18, 2013 IP
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    biili Well-Known Member

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    On the letterhead left side bottom logo maybe i can put just the Icon from Batter Design let me know what you think :D
     
    biili, Dec 19, 2013 IP
  19. Tori0n

    Tori0n Well-Known Member

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    #19
    @biili: This looks very nice, shall we try mirroring the letter and loosing the logo on the botom (or only use the BD image) to make place for contact info, tax number, bank account etc. Loose the color in the top of the envelope and then I think we're almost there
     
    Tori0n, Dec 19, 2013 IP
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    biili Well-Known Member

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    #20
    "Loose the color in the top of the envelope"

    blue and black or just blue?
     
    biili, Dec 19, 2013 IP