[$25] Sign Contest, Simplistic Text, no design work

Hi, I am creating a a sign for a business. The sign will be outdoors and will be 10 ft wide and 5 ft tall.

The business is a storage business called Cloud Springs Storage

Details included will be
Name: Cloud Springs Storage
Phone number: 706-406-4116
Website: cloudspringsstorage.com
Address block: 2862

I am attaching an image of one design from the sign company, which looks decent, but doesn't quite catch your eye enough from the road.

I would like to see some different background colors, and would also like to see the color of the text broken up a little, so the name, phone, and website are different colors and are easy to pick out and read while driving past this sign.

I look forward to your input, and will try to provide feedback ASAP. I will pay via paypal

 

Here is my Design

100% vectored; can be resized
All colors and fonts are changeable
will provide .PNG, .AI, and .psd if requested

 

Still Learning, here's my entry..

 

Full vectorial

 

here is my try,feel free to PM me if you like it

 

Please wait for my entry....

 

Comments are appreciated

 

My concept:

 

Thanks for everyone's input so far.

There are a couple things I need to clarify. The sign will need to include the website url. This will be an outdoor sign along a busy highway, so the sign needs to very clear, and easy to read. Gradients will not work on the sign, as they dont work well for outdoor signage.

I think I only want the street number on the sign, and not the full street address, so 2862 vice 2862 cloud springs road

 

Thanks for the input, can you submit a version without any gradients, and all block lettering.

I dont like the arrows on the one. On the BW one can you make there less lines, increase the visibility of the message

Can you remove the gradients, and switch to block lettering

I like this. Can you increase the size of storage, and get rid of rthe gradient in the bg. Also increase the font size on the phone and url to be a little more visible

can you include the url

This looks good, can you get rid of the full street address, and also make Cloud Springs a little clearer, less decoration on the lettering

 

Thanks for comments...
Updated my entry

 

Thanks for the feedback.

Revision:


Just noticed, i lack a letter "S" on the Cloud Springs. Sorry. I will fix that if you like my concept.

 

Hello,

here is my try. I've posted both larg and small version so you can see it's still quite visible. Feedback appreciated.

Thank you,

Bucko.

View attachment 49245

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Full size demo

 

here is my redone design without gradients and with block lettering, also corrected typo.

 

Which lines do you want removed on the BW design?

 

Another try...

 

Thanks for the second revision. I am going to declare you the winner. Please contact me. I will need you to make a couple small revisions, and sent me a couple different color schemes, but it is pretty clos to what I am looking for.

Thanks to everyone that participated!

puttu, please pm me....thanks