Contest $25 Quick PayPal - Improve This Screen

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  1. geronimo

    geronimo Peon

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    #21
    @MascotSun: I like the register button, as for the icons, they should be 50x50 minimum in size plus yours look pixelated. They also have to be a unique concept.

    @bodil4o, you just cut out the ones I provided. I need a unique (original) concept. I provided the examples as to explain what I meant by "simple".

    I don't want to waste anyone's time here and I do truly appreciate every attempt but if you feel like you cannot meet what I am asking please don't spend too much time on it.

    J
     
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  2. brae123

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    #22
    i'd like to give it a go
     
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  3. bodil4o

    bodil4o Member

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    #23
    The TV isn't but the other idea is :X
    I don't know what to put for support ...
    How about the 3rd ?

    Okay..
    I came up with another idea...

    [​IMG]
    http://img35.imageshack.us/img35/8812/footballpagecopy.png

    Feedback appreciated!
    PS.Great contest - fast feedbacks :p

    P.P.s. maybe if I add the word "hi!" into the bubbles :/

    _____________
    You said you like the "glass" style for the button.
    I don't think it is better...but with green Register now it passes :)
    [​IMG]
    http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/8499/footballpage3copy.png


    And please..I will be here in about 10 hours - don't be fast to close the contest :x I feel so timezoned :X
     
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  4. MascotSun

    MascotSun Member

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    #24
    [​IMG]
     
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  5. mikeljackson

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    #25
    feedback if you like the button or no...

    ICONs i will add whichever icon u want.. or u liked.. but first i need to find which button u want :)

    but tell me u liked the button or no..

    [​IMG]
     
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  6. geronimo

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    #26
    @bodil4o - the friendship one is nice. It is simple and gets the point across. The other two are still not good. The tv just looks amateurish while I don't get the point of the star. Why do you have the "Dont have an account" text so close to the register button?

    @MascotSun : nice unique attempt. Why are all your icons pixelated (they dont look smooth)? It would also help if the icons were 50x50 or 60x60... they are quite small right now.

    @mikeljackson : thanks for the attempt but these are just clipart... the talk button looks almost exactly like gtalk doesn't it? Why the star image? The video image looks decent.
     
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  7. geronimo

    geronimo Peon

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    #27
    Aha, sorry mikeljackson, I didn't read your full post. The register button I don't like, sorry. It's just a round corners button with inside shadow, I can do that myself.
     
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  8. RiodaV

    RiodaV Peon

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    #28
    This is mine. Hope you like it :)

    [​IMG]
     
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  9. geronimo

    geronimo Peon

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    #29
    @MascotSun: much better!. For the third icon, can yo get rid of the yellow color? For the second icon, I think the stars don't belong there. Instead, you could have two flags waving (indicating support for clubs)... The play button is cool.

    @RiodaV: nice entry, I especially like the clubs icon. For the skills icon, I'd rather see something to do with a play button or a camera. For the friendship icon, you have the right idea, but in the icon itself the figures look like they are dancing or something... As for the registration part... the registration button is supposed to be separate from the login box. The login box is for members while the registration button is for the people that are not registered. From your image I get the impression you are inviting the visitor to register in the login box.

    The entries are definitely improving.
     
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  10. Jerlene.net

    Jerlene.net Prominent Member

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    #30
    [​IMG]
     
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  11. geronimo

    geronimo Peon

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    #31
    @Jerlene.net : A unique entry! Please remove the football above the register button as it's not necessary.

    J
     
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  12. Jerlene.net

    Jerlene.net Prominent Member

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    #32
    Sorry. Was just trying to fill the gap as it bothered me. Here it is without it:

    [​IMG]
     
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  13. MascotSun

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    #33
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  14. geronimo

    geronimo Peon

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    #34
    @MascotSun Wonderful work mate, your entry is currently in the lead, the icons are awesome, don't change a thing. One note about your register button, could you make it as wide as the textbox... and try and eradicate the light blue color?
     
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  15. Sabosushimi

    Sabosushimi Active Member

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    #35
    heres my first shot. hope youll like this one <3

    [​IMG]
     
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  16. bizzard

    bizzard Well-Known Member

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    #36
    This contest still open!
     
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  17. geronimo

    geronimo Peon

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    #37
    Is this a question? Yes, I will be closing the contest and deciding on the winner today.
     
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  18. bodil4o

    bodil4o Member

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    #38
    Do we have to remake the login form too ?
    /and the line ... sabosushimi's line won't be able to be coded for widther monitors... ?!
     
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  19. geronimo

    geronimo Peon

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    #39
    No need to remake the login form.
     
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  20. bodil4o

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    #40
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