Contest $25 Quick PayPal - Improve This Screen

Discussion in 'Design Contests' started by geronimo, Sep 8, 2009.

  1. #1
    Hi guys,

    I need to have the following screen improved (instructions are below the image):
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    I would like to have some 60x60 icons on the left of each paragraph - for example for the first paragraph a small tv icon with an antenna beaming out (just a suggestion) ... each icon should depict what the paragraph says.

    I would like to have a register button just above the login form. Something that draws attention and says a text like "Not A Member Yet? Register Here." (doesn't all have to be on the same line).

    Please pay close attention to make sure that the overall screen looks good. You have the freedom to do anything to make the whole thing look good. You can change the little check icon and the bar too if you think your idea looks good. You can add styles to the login form too.

    The colors used for the three text headings are: #64ab24, #497be0, #e82735.

    I will give the prize to the person who makes the overall screen look good.

    Payment is via PayPal. I would like a psd file delivered once I make payment.

    Best of luck to everyone,

    J
     
    geronimo, Sep 8, 2009 IP
  2. chlopzmazur

    chlopzmazur Active Member

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    #2
    My entry. Feedback appreciated.

    [​IMG]
     
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  3. bodil4o

    bodil4o Member

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    #3
    I will do it...
    Wait for my entry!
     
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  4. geronimo

    geronimo Peon

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    #4
    Sorry @chlopzmazur but your entry is not satisfactory.

    The icons don't reflect each paragraph.

    Nice idea with having part of the text outside the register button - I like that - however the register button doesn't look web 2.0.

    J
     
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  5. chlopzmazur

    chlopzmazur Active Member

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    #5
    Here is revision (icons comes from iconarchive). How do you like it?

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  6. mikeljackson

    mikeljackson Peon

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    #6
    my Entry... (Icon can be replaced if you say so)...

    [​IMG]

    Feedback appreciated.
     
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  7. bizzard

    bizzard Well-Known Member

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    #7
    My entry!
    [​IMG]
     
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  8. bodil4o

    bodil4o Member

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    #8
    Entry sent by PM!
    Full web2 and the best :p
    Feedback appreciated !
    PM me if there is something...
    //also for your other contests :p
     
    Last edited: Sep 8, 2009
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  9. geronimo

    geronimo Peon

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    #9
    @chlopzmazur : the icons are too "stockarty" if you know what I mean...

    @mikeljackson : I would prefer really simple web 2.0 icons as opposed to a 3-d effect.

    @bizzard : your concept is the most original however I would like the Nike sign out of there... I like the colored circles and the simple look of the concept.

    @bodil4o: Please submit future revisions here in the thread. Your icons again are 3-d ... no need for that. and the arrows next to the headers are overkill I feel... less is more in my opinion.

    Unfortunately none of the register buttons impress me. Please provide more of a web 2.0 look and less of a 3-d look.

    Here is a suggestion for everyone - perhaps a crowd or something similar could be used as really transparent background inside the register button for better effect.
     
    geronimo, Sep 8, 2009 IP
  10. bodil4o

    bodil4o Member

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    #10
    OK but I didn't get one thing...
    What do you prefer ...
    Arrows or icons ?

    I don't want to post here because somebody can steal it...I don't watermark it.
    PS. will enter again asap.
     
    bodil4o, Sep 8, 2009 IP
  11. jokomamamita

    jokomamamita Well-Known Member

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    #11
    Mine:

    [​IMG]
     
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  12. geronimo

    geronimo Peon

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  13. MascotSun

    MascotSun Member

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    #13
    edit, preparing..
     
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  14. bizzard

    bizzard Well-Known Member

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    #14
    Update!
    [​IMG]
     
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  15. bodil4o

    bodil4o Member

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  16. Chewysmom

    Chewysmom Active Member

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    #16
    my entry:

    [​IMG]
     
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  17. geronimo

    geronimo Peon

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    #17
    Guys, to help you out, here are some simple video icons:
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    [​IMG]

    Here is a simple crowd/supporter/fan icon:
    [​IMG]

    Here is a simple friendship icon:
    [​IMG]
     
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  18. geronimo

    geronimo Peon

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    #18
    @MascotSun : again, just a bunch of stock items... they don't provide a unified concept.

    @bodil4o : Your icons don't relate to the paragraphs...

    @Chewysmom : thanks for the attempt but it's not what I am looking for

    @bizzard : very cool attempt. If possible I would like to see a video broadcast image inside the first ball, a crowd image inside the second and a friendship image inside the last. I have given examples of what I mean above.

    bizzard is currently in the lead.
    @
     
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  19. MascotSun

    MascotSun Member

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    #19
    edit, preparing..
     
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  20. bodil4o

    bodil4o Member

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    bodil4o, Sep 8, 2009 IP