Need logo for for a non profit called "one vision" Need something new and something which will ensure high recall. Max 2 colour concepts unless you really have a cool 3-4 colour concept. Logo will be used on multiple materials so choose colours accordingly.
the eye gives it a feel that this has something to do with eyes like Spectacles or an Eye doctor. Also didnt like the font, have seen many editing studio type businesess use this font. need a different concept.
Interesting approach bit something very similar exists. cannot place it right now though. The white O and the black inside is already out there as a known brand. Need to be different.
This is a non profit for people who are looking for expensive medical treatment but cannot afford it. Its more people driven like all non profits are. Warm colours that appeal to people work best in such cases like chindrens hospital L.A, charity Water, conservation international, oxfam, standup2cancer, non profit leadership alliance etc