Thanks for the revision @3SS I've forwarded it along. Unfortunately my client hasn't been great with feedback, he's pretty much just saying which ones he likes and which ones he doesn't (but no details on why). The contest closes in a little under 7 hours from now. Until then you may keep the entries coming! Thanks everyone
Some more excellent entries! If you're not already working on a logo please don't start, and if you're currently working on one let me know. I will be closing the contest very shortly.
Alright it was a very close call between the top 3 logos, but in the end my client has chosen @3SS as the winner. Thank you to everyone who came up with creative entries!