25 dollar easy logo contest (paypal) need ASAP!

Discussion in 'Design Contests' started by ondemand, Oct 14, 2008.

  1. #1
    Hello,

    Here is the logo you will be changing:

    http://img162.imageshack.us/my.php?image=logobw7.png

    I don't need a drastic change. I just need a bit of an "improvement".

    It now seems to be the weakest link on my new design. You can just type in the url of the logo name with .com It will take you to my site. I don't want to post the url here.


    1. Maybe the shades of blue on my logo could be a bit darker per blue. Maybe try a few different variations.

    2. Maybe try a few different letter styles. Though I do like the ones I have now.

    3. the slogan under the logo just doesn't look very crisp.

    Also, I want to see variations on the slogan. Also maybe the text color and location could be varied slightly

    Intelligent Advertising Solutions
    Intelligent Digital Marketing

    I just feel like the logo is a 8/10 and I want a 10/10.


    I've already received a couple by PM. Just to make a point. I don't anything more stylish or with very overly design letters. It's too stylish and doesn't really represent the brand image I want to project. I would also prefer something a bit more conservative but still beautifully design. This is not great... but to give an example in terms of the more conservative text style. However try other style as well.. This should be creative but professional. We are indeed a company that process mission critical data for our users..

    http://www.itiva.com/
     
    ondemand, Oct 14, 2008 IP
  2. ondemand

    ondemand Peon

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    #2
    btw..i would prefer to have your designs here in the thread ..not by PM if you dont mind...though I will also give feedback on those as well..
     
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  3. onixz100

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    #3
    The logo already looks lovely so there wasn't much I could do to make it any better. In all honesty, I think the design would look amazing if you just removed the slogan entirely.

    Anyway, what I did was:

    1) Darkened the blue so that it matched more of the website.
    2) Repositioned Slogan
    3) Changed slogan
    4) Made the slogan have the same lighting as the logo (darker on the left, to highlighted on the right)
    5) Lowered the logo so that it doesn't conflict with the top of people's browsers. Makes it look more even and gives it more room.

    Almost every font looks a little nasty at such a small size unless you remove anti-aliasing completely.. But you don't like that since you're looking for a more "crisp" look.

    I think you should use my darker blue version but just take away the slogan altogether. However, if you insist on putting a slogan for your website, then I suppose that's your call! :)

    [​IMG]
     
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  4. CR70

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    #4
    Here is my entry



    [​IMG]
     
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  5. shinan

    shinan Well-Known Member

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    #5
    darkened the blue to match your design
    decreased slogan size and repositioned it..

    [​IMG]
     
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  6. waiz86

    waiz86 Well-Known Member

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    #6
    i will be posting mine in a few mins
     
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  7. waiz86

    waiz86 Well-Known Member

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    #7
    [​IMG]
     
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  8. waiz86

    waiz86 Well-Known Member

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    [​IMG]
     
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  9. ondemand

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    #9
    This is too artsy. It doesn't fit with my brand at all. It's hard to read, I don't like the style of the text chosen, etc.
     
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  10. Influ

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    #10
    Wait for mine .
     
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  11. pat3ck

    pat3ck Well-Known Member

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    #11
    Darkened a bit and added a shade at the top half of the text:

    [​IMG]
     
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  12. ondemand

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    #12
    Btw.

    We don't have to keep the OOs interlooped like they are. You guys can change those.

    I'm still not quite liking the change on the text. Maybe even try different style of text like here.. but still with color variations.. mix it up a big...be creative.

    http://www.limelightnetworks.com/
     
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  13. ondemand

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    #13
    Try to change the alignment of the text below the logo and also the style, color..something. It's too close to my original logo..
     
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  14. ondemand

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    #14
    All feedback submitted here and by PM...thanks
     
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  15. waiz86

    waiz86 Well-Known Member

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    #15
    ok i will send a diff concept soon :)
     
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  16. waiz86

    waiz86 Well-Known Member

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    #16
    [​IMG]

    improved font compatibility
     
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    #17
    where is feedback for me?
     
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  18. ondemand

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    #18

    1. let's try yours with the text

    Intelligent Digital Marketing


    2. I don't know exactly what you can change, but lets try to change the style of the logo just a bit. I don't necessarily need the doubled looped Os... maybe try a different text style that is slimmer...
     
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  19. collegerut

    collegerut Well-Known Member

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    #19
    Feedback is always welcomed.
    [​IMG]
     
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  20. waiz86

    waiz86 Well-Known Member

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    #20
    [​IMG]

    a different concept
     
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