$25 Contest - Color and Name card design

I'm having a contest for Smart System Security here before:

http://forums.digitalpoint.com/showthread.php?t=597816

but we have not found anything that we like, then we come out with this logo

http://www.smartsystemsecurity.com/sign2.JPG

http://www.smartsystemsecurity.com/sign3.JPG

I modify this from existing image, of course you can see that amateur do this
and I'm not able to play around with the color, text font etc2

so here is the contest:
we like this logo design but not really about for the color, so play around with color. and if you can find some other font that looks good.

the logo will be used on the signboard also, check the link above

and we like you to design the business card also (well we got the logo already, so basicly you will play around placing this logo left right up down etc2 so it looks good

few rules :
it must be 1 or 2 color (maybe 3 if it does look good but no more than 3 color)
business card will be 2 sided (1 side only logo and website and other regular information)

here is the sample of business card that I make on Ms Paint
http://www.smartsystemsecurity.com/sign4.JPG

 

I will try something... u will see my try in few minutes

 

Feedback pls.. ;]

 

Just my try

 

feedback pls

 

Great one shibligd.

 

small notice shibligd , almost all "security" systems uses such color pallete , dont u think its kinda boring?

 

Thanks NisaneNoob for appreciating

 

check my pm for the card. i'm trying my luck!

 

Post your card here... its public contest =)

 

Yes, please post the design in the forum

btw thanks to all who submit their deisgn
still looking for other entry.

and the design will be used for signboard also,
so make sure the color can be match on the signboard, I think usually it red

and on the business card, can someone try with black color.
somehow I like black color, it does look more professional to me (lol, maybe just me )

 

Edit: nevermind

 

I will try to change my card to black style >.<

 

And here it is ^_^


p.s : i can change anything by your will ^_^

 

here another entry with black like you asked

 

My advise would be, u should use soften red color , because 10 secs looking in that card make my eyes cry.. very big contrast

 

thank all...
anyone can suggest me which color is good.

I'm going to target middle to high class community so the logo must have a professional image.

so far I think black is quite good for the backside, but do you think it good for both side ? or should I put black on the back and regular white on the front ?

any opinion or suggestion or design is really appreciated

 

my entry...

 

I think its pretty good, but on back side that bottom line color ... mhm i think it needs to be changed ;D (only my advise..)

 

A professional design for high class community:



i think it will look better with withe instead of black