$25 - 3D Translucent Glossy Logo

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  1. ExcelFox

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    #21
    jardo, I like the fox, and its pose is pretty good. Do you think you could improvise on the other aspects of the logo.
     
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    #22
    Thanks for the feedback. Here's my revision. :)

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    #23
    Wrong link maybe. Unable to view the revision
     
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    #24
    Please refresh your browser sir. Thanks.
     
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    misterbadz Active Member

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    #25
    my try:
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    #26
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  7. ExcelFox

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    #27
    Good looking fox there SNiiP3R. Got much more details now. It's getting lost in the splash, particularly the head area. How about making the darker area (around the face and ear) more bright orange, same kind you are using on the left. Instead of the white, use yellow, and let the transition from green to orange not have the yellow there, or at least very minimal yellow there. I think much of the attention is being absorbed by the white area, whereas we'd like to have the fox stand out.

    jardo, I like yours too. The background makes everything in the foreground vivid. I'd like to see the Excel written in green, and the X of the fox like the one used by SNiiP3R (or anything else that won't make it look like a Y tilted to the left :))
     
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    #28
    And a thought SNiiP3R, what if we made the fox a bit bigger?
     
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    #29
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    #30
    We are getting there SNiiP3R. Can we increase the orange color to the torso also, and push the bluer area to reduce the white? A more prominent orange fox that is. Can we tone down the whiteness, as I still think it is attracting much more attention than required. Also, I'd like to see a little more green on the left. As of now, it is the orange that is taking much more space. Without reducing the orange there, can you shift the entire thing a bit more to the right, and have a wider green shade?
     
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    #31
    Also, have a green tint on the text EXCEL
     
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    #32
    Thanks for the feedback. Revision.
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    #33
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    #34
    SNiiP3R, the orange shade has been thinned more than was required. a few last changes

    1. The X of the fox looks like a tilted Y when viewed from a small distance. Can you join the other end and maybe have it on the opposite end for more visibility.
    2. The yellow now takes up a lot of space. Can you please increase the width of the orange shade and reduce the width of the yellow, but not reducing the overall width.
    3. The O in the fox, can you use the four colors of the MSO logo to make up the O. Four doughnut pies might do the trick. Or anything you feel would look appropriate.

    jardo,

    much more eye catching than previous one. Could you please make the changes that I have mentioned in point 3 above?
     
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    #35
    Thanks for the feedback. Here's my revision. :)

    [​IMG]
     
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    #36
    Great. Can you change the angle a little more towards the right, so that the orange arc comes down, and the X within the O is seen like an X. Also, do you think the F and X of the FOX should have a different color? I don't want the O to get lost in between the orange colors. See if you can put up a different color.
     
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    #37
    Thanks. Here's the revision. :)

    [​IMG]
     
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    #38
    jardo, I think this is looking good, and the O is looking better also. However, when I zoom the picture, the arcs of the O seem to have a thin border with a different shade (especially in the blue arc). Can you ensure that the colors are absolutely distinct, and the borders are the same as the interior, and have a glossy appearance. Also the violent and blue letters F and X does not seem to fit very well. I think your original orange colors were better.

    Also, would you be able to provide a vector image?
     
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    #39
    Also, jardo, for the letters E and C in EXCEL, if you can cut a slant to the bottom lines of the letters, similar to the top portion of E, then a symmetry shape would form between E and X, C & E, and E and L. If you are not clear, let me know.
     
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    #40
    Also, can you put the letters EF in the center of the O. EF in capital letters, but fitting inside the hollow space in the O. An E and an inverted F joined together may be nice. I am just imagining. If you think it will be ok, put it in. Thanks.
     
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