$20 Logo Design Contest

Hi, here's my entry, feedback appreciated, thanks

 

here is my entry...

 

Thanks for the logos folks. Here are some of my feedback:

Need more emphasis on "FOR". The word should be all caps.

The eye looks scary in the letter "o" of the word "FOR". Maybe you replace it with something else more pleasing Also, a little space between the two words would be nice.

 

My entry

 

thanks for the feedback i will edit it

EDIT: i tried writing the words one below the other . i have kept it simple so far, but if you want, the "face" can be developed further




i had another try with a keyhole and a key....not sure if it was the right approach. but here it is anyway:

 

This looks nice. Can you try:

With a different font?
Develop the face further
What is the dark ball ad the end of K?

I'll end the contest in 24 hours.

--Ace

 

here is my entry hope you like it...

 

1. will try with different fonts

2. will develop the face and see what comes up

3. it was meant to be an eye but no longer looks like one. that's why i removed it in the other preview

will definitely get the revised entry in before 24 hours

 

MORE feedback:

Some how, the design seems very simple, can you spice it up a bit?

There is more emphasis on Look, if you can transfer that to FOR, would be better.

 

here's mine: ( colors are changeable..)

 

simple try

 

i have made some revisions...but not too sure about them. will post all my revisions by May 21, GMT 10:30 AM

 

just to know my luck with this one.



Regards,
Rice
KEEP IT SIMPLE!!!

 

My entry


Feedback appreciated

 

Can you give space between the two words?

 

Another version

 

Entry with space

Thanks

 

well, i tried a lot of different things. one idea would have been to put an actual face over there....a clip art maybe. but that would have looked too cheesy. so here's what i have so far:
(4 images in this post, one more image in the next)