$20 Logo Design (48 hours)

Feedback please?

 

@hayshn: Thanks for being the first submission. I like the ivy look, but your logo needs more color and the font looks really plain.

 

alright what about now. I'm not too great with text, but I try

 

here is my trial

if you like the concept then I will enhance it more
also plz give feedback

 

my try, feedback appreciated..

 

You said it is a new web site and not active but here it is.
http://www.wyngatehomes.com/commonssplash.html

 

FEEDBACK
@hayshn: I definitely like the extra vines, but the font still doesn't look right.
@Technoworld_1: Not a fan at all of the design. It looks like an old video game, sorry.
@Cameljourney: Way to use Utah in your theme. Could you pull out the sun, it distracts the eye. Thanks.

 

@a4hire: Yes, I am aware of this website, it is the developers website. This logo contest though, is for the home owner association. Hope this helps.

 

My entries.. Any edits can be made..

 

@dimitri123: Really like your concept. A couple of edits, though. The text for the tagline seems to boxy (but love the script font for the main title). Also, I really like the graphic of the leaf and mountains, but the leaf looks like an Irish clover. Could you do a leaf that looks more like it's from the Rocky Mountains?

 

Thanks for the feedback.. Will do the edits..

 

What about these??

 

Hi. Thanks for the contest. Here's my first try...

 

Little work on the text.

 

another try, different idea..

 

This is the best logo, hope you will win

 

here goes mine....

do reply for any feedbacks