If the text was a bit more bolder/defined and the lightening looked more like a Z it would be better.
But is the style appealing to your audience? Main priority is how your viewers see your style of site, over your own view and trust me on this, I have learnt for myself! If you require something cleaner, consider the following preview, although if you do want something totally formal, just say.
Please Give Me Feedbacks on my creations thanks..I Know its a bit simple but its the best pro creation i got..usually i use effects