Contest $20 - Invite - Feedback - 24 Hours

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    Jerlene.net, Jan 20, 2011 IP
  2. seventh

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    #2
    Ok, I am not sure if I understand completely how You imagine it and I don't know if You want print it or send by e-mail but here's my first draft:
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    Every feedback appreciated.
     
    seventh, Jan 21, 2011 IP
  3. Jerlene.net

    Jerlene.net Prominent Member

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    #3
    I really love the way you fit his pictures in there.

    I don't like the pastel colours used though. In stead of that light pink, dark pink and aqua, can you use primary colours. Maybe red, yellow, green, orange.

    Also, try to stay away from blue. The blue characters are fine but anything extra shouldn't be blue.

    The "First Birthday" text is nice but can you put "You're Invited To Jeremiah's 1st Birthday!".
     
    Jerlene.net, Apr 1, 2011 IP
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  5. Jerlene.net

    Jerlene.net Prominent Member

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    #5
    Can you lose the red in the back of the shield and maybe the cross in the middle of it? Also, I'm not too keen on the colours.

    I'll up the prize if I find the right one.
     
    Jerlene.net, Apr 5, 2011 IP
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    #6
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    How about some green?
     
    seventh, Apr 5, 2011 IP
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    #7
    As a whole, the second one is best but I like what you did to the shield in the third one. Is there anyway you can merge the two and maybe outline the shield with a shaded black or something. I want it to stick out. Also, can you remove the text you put on it? After that, everything should be fine.

    I'm looking for more than one version though. I'll make this a $60 contest!

    3rd Place: $10
    2nd Place: $20
    1st Place: $30
     
    Jerlene.net, Apr 5, 2011 IP
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    #8
    Okay...well that was harder then I thought to find the right sesame street images...Anyways I took two of the pics or Jeremiah and I have a version with the wings and without...I honestly dont feel the wings fit properly with the rest of the theme, but did as you requested. These images have been resized...the orignal version is a full sheet of paper, again you do not specify how you plan to print this...I can change it if needed.

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    #9
    I love what you did with this. Amazing work! I wouldn't change a thing. Just waiting on a few more people who have showed some interest in this contest. Once their entries are in I will pick the winners.

    And to clarify, I will be printing it on regular sized paper. 11 x 8 I believe.
     
    Jerlene.net, Apr 6, 2011 IP
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    aTo, Apr 6, 2011 IP
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    #11
    The background colour is a little too feminine. Also, can you use a couple more pictures of him somehow?
     
    Jerlene.net, Apr 6, 2011 IP
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    #13
    Thanks! Looks great! I'll be choosing a winner soon. Get in on this soon.

    So far, I'm really liking ScarletWolfe's design for first.
     
    Jerlene.net, Apr 6, 2011 IP
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    #16
    Did another version...just resized things a bit , to better balance the whole thing..A lil too much white space for my liking...I also brightened the picture of him with the hat a bit more...seemed still too dark.

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    Also my design is 300 dpi so it should print out high quality...
     
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    #17
    any feedback on the second design :)
     
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    #19
    Congrats, logos4all! Great person to work with and the final image was perfect.

    Money sent, files received.
     
    Jerlene.net, Apr 16, 2011 IP
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    #20
    Thank you for selecting my design as the winner, payment received files sent.
     
    logos4all, Apr 16, 2011 IP