$20 Header Contest Fast Payment

Discussion in 'Design Contests' started by wallarookiller, Oct 3, 2009.

  1. z-cone

    z-cone Peon

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    #21
    emm.. what about my job, any feedbacks?!
     
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  2. wallarookiller

    wallarookiller Active Member

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    #22

    Your first set are the ones i like. especially these two.


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    I dont want the fruit but they look really good. These are two of my favorites so far. So try getting rid of the fruit Keeping the texture I love the backgroungd image in this one http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/3724/epicjj.jpg and I like the image on the right in this one http://img203.imageshack.us/img203/2012/epic2532.jpg if it's not copyright, maybe move it to the left.

    Maybe change the tag line to a dark red to math the h1 tags and try a couple different professional fonts for Epic Health and were getting close.

    I would really like to see some more of what you can do with these because they seem to be catching my eye just aren't quite there yet.

    Thanks
     
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  3. Chewysmom

    Chewysmom Active Member

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    #23
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    and

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  4. wallarookiller

    wallarookiller Active Member

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    #24
    A bit too bubbly for such a serious site. I'm looking for real a professional looking type design. The colors don't really seem to match either but it's in the right direction and I like the image on the left it could be changed up a bit and win also maybe try a different image in the background.
     
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  5. Chewysmom

    Chewysmom Active Member

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    #25
    thanks for feedback
    let me know if it's better

    [​IMG]
     
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  6. Chewysmom

    Chewysmom Active Member

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    #26
    more serious one:

    [​IMG]
     
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  7. wallarookiller

    wallarookiller Active Member

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    #27
    Allright I put it on there to look at it. What I'm seeing is the font color you used needs to be a little bit darker red and on the right side it needs to fade to white a little more so you can't notice the square boarder so much.

    And maybe try a different color for the guys on the left. Mess around with some colors and get back to me it looks like it's close.
     
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  8. Chewysmom

    Chewysmom Active Member

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    #28
    modified,
    the search bar can go on top of the header. I can install it if you need.

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    and

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  9. wallarookiller

    wallarookiller Active Member

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    #29
    Now that I think about it I think I'm going to move the search in to the body more any way to make it more prominent.

    I like the two guys that are dark red and orange. Those are perfect. I don't like the red lines around them but like the lines around them in the other image that are grey.

    I still don't think I want the header to be so noticeable. I think we would have something if the whole thing was just a little lighter and faded into white a little more on the right and the red is just a little too dark now (doesn't match).

    I appreciate you taking the time to work with this.
     
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  10. Chewysmom

    Chewysmom Active Member

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    #30
    thanks for feedback

    this one has faded right side
    I lightened the red circle around the little people.
    hope is better

    [​IMG]
     
    Chewysmom, Oct 6, 2009 IP
  11. Chewysmom

    Chewysmom Active Member

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    #31
    softer circle colors:

    [​IMG]
     
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  12. z-cone

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    #32
    what about this one? : [​IMG]
     
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  13. wallarookiller

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    #33
    I was wondering where you went.

    If you could get rid of the women and move the the two people images to the left, make them smaller an try to make them blend in with the colors of the site a bit more. Then lighten the whole thing so its not so in your face noticeable at the top and fade the right into white it should look pretty good.

    Let me know what you think I'm looking forward to checking it out.
     
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    wallarookiller Active Member

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    #34
    Wow looks pretty good. I'm not sure it's perfect but I'm out of ideas for it.

    If you can think of anything please feel free. I'm going to wait for z-cone and see if he comes up with anything and see if anyone else enters so by the end of the day US time or early tomorrow I'll pic a winner.

    It's on the site now http://epic-health.com so take a look and see what you think. You have way more of an eye for this type of thing then I do. I would like to see another version if you can think of something to add too it.
     
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  15. Chewysmom

    Chewysmom Active Member

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    #35
    thanks :)
    I see what I can do
     
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    Chewysmom Active Member

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    #36
    another try:

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    #37
    some more feedback about my?!
    didnt see msg before ..
     
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  18. z-cone

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    #38
    1 more.. ;/ [​IMG]
    about last one i will do little a bit later
     
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  19. wallarookiller

    wallarookiller Active Member

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    #39
    Looks like your the winner! Do me a favor and lighten up the whole thing on this one just a little bit more and try a couple different fonts for epic health. maybe two different ones for the two words then pm me your paypal email.
     
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  20. Chewysmom

    Chewysmom Active Member

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    #40
    thanks, will pm you soon with the different fonts.
     
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