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  1. owain1

    owain1 Peon

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    #21
    I see that I did it, and now others have inc yourself have but not sure on the point you were making!
     
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  2. chenvova11

    chenvova11 Peon

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    #22
    @ Nang-Ex - the graphical element with TV, flag is ok, but I am not sure about the size, how it is put together with the text, the font and the font color. I don't feel any alignment there. Pls see if you can incorporate another font, size, alignment and the way how the elements are combined. Thanks and look forward to the changes.
     
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  3. owain1

    owain1 Peon

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    #23
    Did you see my improvements? Changed the pic and the text font and colours

    let me know what you think

    Cheers
     
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  4. creative-rascal

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    #24
    Hi..
    I've done the modifications as said by you..

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  5. gamelord

    gamelord Well-Known Member

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    #25
    Revised entry

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  6. Nang-Ex

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    #26
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  7. TindiRindi

    TindiRindi Well-Known Member

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    #27
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  8. chenvova11

    chenvova11 Peon

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    #28
    @ owain1 - thanks for the latest submission. in terms of the TV I think I like it better than the previous two. But in terms of the font color and font type I think the #8 is better (out of three submissions). But I wonder if you can can go a little bit more serious direcion in terms of the font. Also, you can change the color of "Denmark" to redish as well as "com". Let's try to make the tagline less standing out ... e.g. by decreaseing the size and by changing the color to a less prominent tone. Let's write MyDenmark.com (capital "M" and capital "D"). But most importantnly try to change the font type to an even simpler look. Look forward to the changes.

    I will give feedback to other designers shortly. Thanks to all.
     
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  9. onlyfights

    onlyfights Notable Member

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    #29
    My Entry:

    [​IMG]
     
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  10. chenvova11

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    #30
    @ creative-rascal - I think this submission if better. Let me tell you what I like. I like the self-drawn tv set. but I think you can make it look more like TV by putting antenna. because right now it also resembles a microwave, no? I like the tagline and how you used another color for the "fun" word. nicely done. however, I think the color for the tagline could be made a bit lighter. But my main concern is the colors of the "MyDenmarkTV" part. I know I mentioned the blue and orange colors elsewhere above, but the ones you are using seem a bit dull and faint to me. I don't know if it is the gradient effect you are using or it's the colors. In my opinion those colors (blue and orange) don't fit well together with the graphics. It can also be that you are using too many colors, I don't know. But try 2 or max 3 colors. Maybe you could try to use redish for My and TV and something else more matching for the Denmark part. Similarly try red for the Denmark part and another color for My and Tv.

    Also I think I like when .com is mentioned in the logo. Please try to incorporate that too. Thanks and look forward to the changes.
     
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  11. jokomamamita

    jokomamamita Well-Known Member

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    #31
    Just thought of giving this a try. Here is my design:

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  12. MantisArt

    MantisArt Well-Known Member

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    #32
    Hi, here's my entry, feedback appreciated, thanks

    [​IMG]
     
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  13. gamelord

    gamelord Well-Known Member

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    #33
    here is another revision

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  14. chenvova11

    chenvova11 Peon

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    #34
    @ gamelord - you would know my comments re:#25. But #33 you got it right. overall I think your logo looks clean and fresh, though the blue and the orange colors are not my favorite. But what tickles me about the logo is the font you are using. Although it look creative, I can't not say I would choose this font as a winner. Not that I don't like it, but it just does not portray what I want. feel free to use other fonts and colors. I would only be glad to provide a constructive feedback.
     
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  15. gamelord

    gamelord Well-Known Member

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    #35
    ok i will try ur suggestion :)
     
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  16. chenvova11

    chenvova11 Peon

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    #36
    Nang-Ex - even though you improved on the font color I still think that the combination you are using as well as the alignment of the graphical elements with the text does not convince me. If you want to convince you need to use more simplicity and alignment ... and please don't use that huge screen ... it outchouts the text completely. In the latest submission/entry I think there is too much red. Try to out the elements in the horizontal alignment perhaps (left to right) because this one does not work for me. thanks for your entry and look forward to your dramatic changes.
     
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  17. chenvova11

    chenvova11 Peon

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    #37
    @ TindiRindi - I honestly think you've dramatically improved your design. I have several comments. 1) let's try to incorporate ".com" in the logo. 2) Also for the tagline, perhaps you can use lighter color (a bit lighter gray).. 3) can you also improve the gradient. .. I am not fan of your gradient ..I think it is a little bit too much for me. 4) Try to see where you can incorporate the Danish flag. Please use your creativity, not need to insert in the tv .. although that's definitely an option to consider ... but I really like how you placed "my" inside the tv set. look forward to your changes/modifications.
     
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  18. gamelord

    gamelord Well-Known Member

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    #38
    Here is the revised entry.

    Font improved
    Colors improved

    [​IMG]
     
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  19. owain1

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    #39
    Hopefully this is an improvement, The orange and red didn't go so I've matched the blue/red text with the tv set.
    Anymore feedback would be great

    [​IMG]


    Cheers
     
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  20. Neonic

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    #40
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