2 Websites review for A fresher web developer

I am a new web developer and an old blogger, recently i did some work for someone and created this sites.
Please review and tell me what are pros and cons of my websites?

1. http://vulpix.in/
2. sydneysoymilk.com

Please browse throughout website and Share your judgemnt here

 

for vulpix .in on about us page I can see image, there is no text... this is not good for SEO....
you should have more text to get searched on Google

 

Nice job. first of all, it's unclear how to launch the flash site.
I didn't want to wait for the intro, if it even said.

 

To be honest I like them both. I have created about 30 websites for my clients and I'm happy to say I like yours. The camera crew filming your logo on http://vulpix.in/ is very clever

 

thanks this is motivational boost for me

 

Nice job. But poor seo

 

yup i understand, whatever my boss say

 

its to nice and very unique

 

The website that you create was awesome the viewers will enjoy to visit and explore your website.
Hope you can visit our website too at netmusketeer.com

 

#1 had a great design but loaded slow.
#2 Didn't load at all.

 

To be honest.. I like your site but you can add some features..