Thanks for the critiques. I will try to use them in the future for future sales... Right now I got to do some researching. Thanks though..
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Wow I must say to alexa that is the most intelligent well thought out post I have read on DP for a while. If you want to make some changes listen to that post. I would always go for a domain over a blogger blog anytime as you have full control over it. At the end of the day it cost 89c for a .info or only $10 for a .com not much to invest into what is supposed to be a business. Pete
Dont worry, Clickbank has a 60 days cookie. As long as they buy within 60 days,you still will get the commission.
In addition to what alexa said about the white-on-black text, your links aren't very obvious. Just from skimming they look more like bolded words than links to a product. The links to the products at the bottom of the articles should stand out more, so the reader can find them and click on them right away without really reading the articles, if that's what they want.