2 flyers - looking for feedback...

Discussion in 'Design' started by tony84, Jun 13, 2012.

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  1. #1
    Im just looking for some pointers. Im not really a designer, ive done 2 designs with a few differences. Just looking to see if theyre looking acceptable and whether anyone has any suggestions or ideas on how they can be improved.

    Many thanks.


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    tony84, Jun 13, 2012 IP
  2. ghauri2012

    ghauri2012 Greenhorn

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    #2
    contact professional designer..........
     
    ghauri2012, Jun 14, 2012 IP
  3. baigtayyab

    baigtayyab Banned

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    #3
    discuss with expert,
     
    baigtayyab, Jun 14, 2012 IP
  4. tony84

    tony84 Well-Known Member

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    what about this?

    a professional is something i cant afford im just starting out
     

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  5. mediapro

    mediapro Well-Known Member

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    #5
    Not bad at all.

    The one with the colored background is the one you should go with.

    One small thing. On the right side (the page with the color back) align your white "contact us" box to be centered horizontally
    and then right align your text the the edge of the box like you have now.

    Hope that helps.
     
    mediapro, Jun 14, 2012 IP
  6. tony84

    tony84 Well-Known Member

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    Thanks, i will do. Its just a mock up so far, i need to get it tidied up to be print ready.
     
    tony84, Jun 14, 2012 IP
  7. mediapro

    mediapro Well-Known Member

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    You are welcome :)
     
    mediapro, Jun 14, 2012 IP
  8. xendurinan

    xendurinan Banned

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    #8
    I know it was hard work for you but thanks GOD finally you have done it.
    Thanks for your concept.
     
    xendurinan, Jun 18, 2012 IP
  9. myasir132

    myasir132 Greenhorn

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    #9
    good job, nice work, keep it up
     
    myasir132, Jun 24, 2012 IP
  10. jammes007

    jammes007 Peon

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    nice work man i like it good job
     
    jammes007, Jun 25, 2012 IP
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    traxport121 Active Member

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    #11
    Looks kinda plain. But nice effort :)
     
    traxport121, Jun 25, 2012 IP
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    jenyfarlopej Member

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    #12
    I think it's perfect design.
    I hope that is good job. I like it. Best of luck.
     
    jenyfarlopej, Jun 30, 2012 IP
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    #13
    Good work but contact professional.
     
    bashishtha, Jul 7, 2012 IP
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    Irfi0009 Banned

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    #14
    Are you contact this id this is big designer..seo.suport@gmail.com...
     
    Irfi0009, Jul 8, 2012 IP
  15. dicheetal

    dicheetal Greenhorn

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    #15
    They are rather boring and, thus, unappealing. Just to make it fancier you could, for instance, replace the 3 bullets with 3 diamonds (or how should I call it?) like the one in the logo
     
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    dicheetal Greenhorn

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    They are rather boring and, thus, unappealing. Just to make it fancier you could, for instance, replace the 3 bullets with 3 diamonds (or how should I call that?) like the one in the logo
     
    dicheetal, Jul 13, 2012 IP