I'm currently undecided on whether I think rounded or square looks better.. doh! Can you just try something more than an outline? Fill it with not just a solid white... I dunno, do SOMETHING.
You're definitely taking it in the right direction. I like. Can you try not a solid BG in the checkbox though? Looks sort of out of place... just something subtle would do it I think! Also, if possible, just try to decrease the amount of vertical space required.... So far this is my favorite...
Yup I will try both of those amends soon. Probably/maybe my last changes heh. Thanks for positive feedback.
I have chosen DaveyBoy as the winner! Thanks! I did like some of the other designs and have noted many of your usernames as I may contact you again for future design needs. Thanks again to all!