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Contest $150 - Retail Package Design

Discussion in 'Design Contests' started by Borduhh, Jul 26, 2014.

  1. sikka2010

    sikka2010 Well-Known Member

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    #21
    sikka2010, Jul 27, 2014 IP
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    Michael Tinnin Active Member

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    Michael Tinnin, Jul 27, 2014 IP
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    Gladiator_28 Well-Known Member

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    #23
    Gladiator_28, Jul 28, 2014 IP
  4. Borduhh

    Borduhh Well-Known Member

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    #24
    So far this is our favorite design!

    Michael on the front can you remove everything below the POWOR logo and just add the word Surge, as that is the model name for this product. The advanced charging technology is coined PeakPowor ® Technology. This should be added to the features list instead of light and convenient.

    As well I would love the same white wave on every side of the package, including the side with our logo currently. You can remove the logo and text there.

    On the back you can remove the barcode and add it to the bottom of the package if possible. We would like to switch the layout so that the feature list is larger and on top, while the We Powor Lives portion is on bottom. For the SolarAid Portion we would love to see the title aligned semi-right underneath the curve, the SolarAid logo on the left and the following text on the right:

     
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  5. sikka2010

    sikka2010 Well-Known Member

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    #25
    @Borduhh : any feedback for my entry.

    Regards
    Sikka ;)
     
    sikka2010, Jul 28, 2014 IP
  6. Borduhh

    Borduhh Well-Known Member

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    #26
    Hi Sikka,

    There is way too much going on there. We are looking for a simple/modern design. Take a look at what we liked above to see what we are looking for.

    I hope this helps!
     
    Borduhh, Jul 28, 2014 IP
  7. Vagz

    Vagz Well-Known Member

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    #27
    Any feedback?
     
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    Gladiator_28 Well-Known Member

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    Gladiator_28, Jul 28, 2014 IP
  9. Borduhh

    Borduhh Well-Known Member

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    #29
    Hi Guys,

    Please look at my feedback for Sikka. Have a look at Michael's design as it portrays a lot of the characteristics that we are looking for.
     
    Borduhh, Jul 28, 2014 IP
  10. Michael Tinnin

    Michael Tinnin Active Member

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    #30
    Michael Tinnin, Jul 28, 2014 IP
  11. Borduhh

    Borduhh Well-Known Member

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    #31
    We are close with this! My partner took a look and has some suggestions:
    • Instead of the SolarAid logo, can we try a custom icon or logo that would represent "Poworing lives"? As well we are changing the text to - "With every purchase, we Powor the lives of families in need by giving them a chance at a brighter future through clean, low-cost solar power."
    • We love the images on the back in this design you created: http://i6.minus.com/iujpMXssjkUl5.jpg. If possible can we place these vertical on the left.
      • 1. Charge the Powor Surge (image of it plugged into a usb port/wall)
      • 2. Use the Powor Surge to charge your device. (Image you have, just make the stick bluish).
    • The features can go on the right, and can remove the title. They look great, just some grammatical adjustments:
      • Universal Micro-USB Connection
      • Charges most smartphones up to 2 full times
      • 180 Day Limited Warranty
      • Overcharge and Undercharge Protection
    • Below that We can have a dedicated section to PeakPowor ® Advanced Charging Technology
      • With PeakPower ® your Powor Surge communicates directly with your device to find its optimal charging speed and power, giving it the best charge every time.
    • Please make the 3000mAh have a bolder font for better visibility.
    • Please make the word "surge" stick out more with a bolder font.
    • Please turn the barcode white and cut its height in half.
    I think that in the black and white design will be the winner!
     
    Borduhh, Jul 28, 2014 IP
  12. Tarcea Sergiu

    Tarcea Sergiu Active Member

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    #32
    [​IMG]
     
    Tarcea Sergiu, Jul 28, 2014 IP
  13. Michael Tinnin

    Michael Tinnin Active Member

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    #33
    I'll have some updates soon :)
     
    Michael Tinnin, Jul 28, 2014 IP
  14. Michael Tinnin

    Michael Tinnin Active Member

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    #34
    Michael Tinnin, Jul 28, 2014 IP
  15. Borduhh

    Borduhh Well-Known Member

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    #35
    Thanks Mike. Can you change the donation text quick?
     
    Borduhh, Jul 28, 2014 IP
  16. Michael Tinnin

    Michael Tinnin Active Member

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    #36
    Is this the latest Donation details?

    Instead of the SolarAid logo, can we try a custom icon or logo that would represent "Poworing lives"? As well we are changing the text to - "With every purchase, we Powor the lives of families in need by giving them a chance at a brighter future through clean, low-cost solar power."​
     
    Michael Tinnin, Jul 28, 2014 IP
  17. Borduhh

    Borduhh Well-Known Member

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    #37
    Yes.
     
    Borduhh, Jul 28, 2014 IP
  18. Michael Tinnin

    Michael Tinnin Active Member

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    #38
    Michael Tinnin, Jul 28, 2014 IP
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    Monkz Active Member

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    #39
    ^ That's a pretty good design. well done.
     
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  20. Borduhh

    Borduhh Well-Known Member

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    #40
    Michael, this is great work! We are 95% there, but we want to perfect the package.
    1. I think this text will work better for the PeakPowor paragraph, but the trademark logo needs to be smaller font:
      • Using our unique PeakPowor ® technology, your Powor charger can communicate with any device to find its ideal charging speed and power. This gives you the best charge every time.
    2. I love the lightning bolt that goes through the word surge, but is there a way to make the 3,000mAh more bold to stand out a bit more?
    3. The only concern I have is with our "We Powor Lives" section. It doesn't seem to flow well with the package design. We think the icon sort of sticks out from the package and it appears like there is a lot of empty space in that section which is not what we are looking for. Here are some updates:
      • Can we use a more custom icon? One that contains our logo, or at least colors. To give you inspiration we will be using our donations to provide solar lights to developing countries. So maybe a light bulb or something would work. Any ideas you have here would help.
      • I think we need longer text in that section as well. You can try this:
    I think this should get us to the 100% to end this contest!
     
    Borduhh, Jul 29, 2014 IP