$150 Logo Contest - Insights - Due Dec. 6th

feedback please.

 

Tanks for the feedback!

Help me get a clear point of view here. You liked my first 2 entries? I made another 2 variations after those tow. If so I will know where to focus next if I were to make some improvements.

 

Thank you for the update. Is it possible to get some clarity on what exactly your client is looking for? I feel some disconnect between the original post and the entries that were pointed out.
Is this FOR a coffee house or are they looking for a coffee house "feel"? Can your client tell us how a cup of coffee says anything about "motivational speaking"? And what colors do they consider "vibrant"? Any and all information you provide will help us in developing a proper solution for your client.

"Company: Insights
Keywords: Energy, Motivational Speaking, coffee house, new, fresh, energetic
Colors: Coffee House style, vibrant colors"

 

My header proposal. Hope you like it.

 

Hi,
Please have a look at my mock-up

 

More feedback, I emailed them back once there 3 picks were on the first page, yup.

Ok, a little more about the company they are starting. Basically it is a small business incubator. They have a common area, like a coffee shop with wifi, fax, scanner/copier. Along with the common area to do business, there have conference room and some office space members can schedule to use. Third, small business seminars, not just small business but also some motivational speaking. There decor for the building is going up right now, going for the coffee house theme, browns bright, energetic. If you work out of your home, need a place to meet clients, or to network with other small business people from your community along with the themed seminars during the week. Hope that explains it better for anyone with questions.




has potential, it caught my interest. I realize brown is a really fun color. I do like on how it has the lighter swoosh under the words-maybe something similar could add some life to 29
I still like . I'm not sure about the text being shiny gold, but do like the accent under the word

 

Also, I like how it is different and caught my eye-how would that look as a cutout on the white page?

looks fun. The color combo is not what I'd pick first off. What about removing the circle it is on and working with the text to jazz it up.

I like . Any graphic ideas besides a coffee cup?

 

awesome feedback! thanks for letting us know! I'll start improving my designs tomorrow

 

Thanks Tom. Update to come.

 

Here is my entry



MYND

 

Logo Proposition for INSIGHTS GROUP
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Ha yupp, In case I don't win. Thanks!

 

Thanks, Davey.

I'm glad you like it, Lightning-Software, here are a few simple variations:



Is there anything specific you would like me to add/change?

 

thanks for the feedback.
I'll see what i can come up with and post a revision.

 

some awesome entrie

 

Here is some more feedback on yours Cela
I like the one on the bottom. Any other texts that will look trendier?

 

Ill be in this.

 

I will bring another entry to this contest. Now I have a more in depth view of what you want. Before I was confused.

 

Updated entry: