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I've seen closer

The font is more rounded than that in places

 

In general, I like your entry but the letters don't look like the Sti font. They look like your own (cool) creation but not what I need

 

My try.

 

thnaks for the feedback bro....i totally forgot the s was rounded.....I'm revising it...

 

here it is......

I hope it's close now.....please let me know if I'm going right....

 

Thank you for your prompt reply
Here is one more entry



Anything let me know
Feedback Appreciated

 

This is good but the corners are too sharp and it doesn't look like it's part of the exact same script family

 

Definitely an improvement. The only thing i'm not sure about is the 'E'. The stars are also slightly the wrong shape

 

Nice, a lot closer & I like the 'e'. The V looks a little like a U though. You should also remove the gradient effect and just make it in the standard STi pink.

 

Fixed the 'E'.....and the stars too.....

Thanks again for quick feedback.

 

Looks great. Try it with a lower case 'e'

 

Thank you for liking and appreciating my work
Below are the mods

Still Anything let me know
Feedback Appreciated

 

@creativediva that's good, The only think is the breakage in the lines. They should be continuous (see pic) below

I hope to announce a winner today. Thanks everyone for all your entries

As a final advice, add a thin white border like in the picture below



The winner will be announced in the next 24hrs

 

Here is my entry with continues white line.. & thin white border..



Still anything let me know..

 

I like this but am having some trouble with the way 'V' joined with the 'e'. I think you should remove the break between them at the top & try and make the inner line from the 'V' curve naturally into the 'e'

 

Here's my Design Psd and actual image upon payment. stars need some work. will be fixed if u like

 

Here are mode you requested with the letter V joined to e with a curve..



Still anything let me know..

 

Here it is....