$120 Landing Page Contest - Payment Via Paypal - ENDS 3/11 @ 5pm PST

FallenShadow - Can you move the free case review to the right side of the page?

mx84 - Not crazy about the fonts but I like the design

I will have further feedback when I hear from the other partners on this

 

Reversed the content and case review, as you requested.

http://imageftw.com/uploads/20110303/Landing2.png

 

Color change/Pattern added

 

is it over yet ?
here's my try


I took the text from your sample link.
It's just for example for your content.

 

My Entry:



Full View : http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/4753/84308932.png

 

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Larger version at http://www.hostez.info/uploadpics/INJURED.png

 

my entry...hope you like it.

feedback will be needed for us.



Uploaded with ImageShack.us

http://img121.imageshack.us/img121/557/edwardmbernstein.jpg

for real size..is here:

http://postimage.org/image/n5zxgip0/

watermark can be removed.

 

Thank you for the entries so far. I am still waiting on feedback from the other 2 partners. I will get back to everyone with any requested changes/revisions ASAP

 

hi respected sir, this contest is still on??

regards
raja

 

Yes this contest is still on. It may be extended an extra day or 2. I will have feedback for the current designers in a few hours.

 

We have decided that the color scheme we are going for is the light blue/blue color scheme used by several of the designers in this competition. We would also like to see our slogan "Enough Said, Call Ed" used more prominently in the designs

fallenshadow: The site is too dark. Also we did not like the fonts used in the top portion of the page. Could you also use the phrase "enough said. CALL ED" prominently somewhere on the page.

mx-84: We like the design but it looks too formal. Could you lighten up the colors and maybe make it grab the attention a little more? Could you also use the phrase "enough said. CALL ED" prominently somewhere on the page.

Piggy: Your site is also too dark and not as sharp as we would like. Could you incorporate some other elements? Could you also use the phrase "enough said. CALL ED" prominently somewhere on the page.

Ardianet: Your design is a good start but doesn't have the professional finished look we are looking for. Also we have settled on a blue/light blue color scheme.

MrLegend: Great design. Great Color scheme. On the top of the page (in the gray bar) could you put "The Law offices of Edward M. Bernstein and Associates"? Could you also use the phrase "enough said. CALL ED" prominently somewhere on the page.

neilparnham: Again, this is a good start but doesn't have the look and feel of the landing page we are going for. The page is too dark and doesn't really "call out"

yugo: Great design. Great Color scheme. On the top of the page could you put "The Law offices of Edward M. Bernstein and Associates"? Also the "Injured? CALL ED" that you have at the top of the page doesn't match the rest of the page. I would like to see it look a little sharper. Could you also use the phrase "enough said. CALL ED" prominently somewhere on the page. Instead of the "know your rights" information could you do something like this HERE (but keep the picture of Ed)

 

Thanks for your feedback, Do you mean you want to remove the links on the gray bar and put "The Law offices of Edward M. Bernstein and Associates" instead of it or under the links

 

Well we removed the links in the second revision. I would like you to put it in the gray bar (it should be one of the first thing people see when the landing page comes up

 

Revision:

 

Mr.Legend: Could you pull out the "call ed" with the arrow next to his head and add the other 2 images from the sample landing page I provided (just trying to see how it looks with the 4 images)

 

Here you go, Revision:

 

Mr. Legend: I appreciate the quick response. A few more small changes. Can I see how the top bar looks in yellow instead of gray? Also could you change the "free case review" and "submit" to yellow as well. The boss is wanting to see a little more color.

 

No Problem, Here you go revisions:

 

Mr. Legend: I like the bottom one better but on the "free case review" and "submit" button I didn't want the text in yellow I wanted the actual area and submit button themselves to be yellow (I should have been more clear about this). Also could you do a darker shade of yellow (almost like an orange). I sent you a PM with details.

 

Revisions: