$120 Landing Page Contest - Payment Via Paypal - ENDS 3/11 @ 5pm PST

I am back with another contest and this one is for 10 days. I need a 1 page website design for a local law firm. I need something clean and professional without a bunch of clutter. I want a glossy web 2.0 feel (not a cheap looking template). I HAVE PROVIDED THE URL FOR A VERY SIMPLE LAYOUT TYPE I AM LOOKING FOR (I EXPECT YOURS TO BE MUCH BETTER). I need this landing page to really grab peoples attention! I have also provided the URLs from some competitors to give you an idea of what I am looking for. This could possibly lead to more work for the designer (if successful we will be doing several landing pages for different areas of law).

LANDING PAGE SAMPLE​

I do not need the site coded because I will pay someone to have that done at a later time.

REQUIRED: 1 PAGE (LANDING)
CONTEST END: CONTEST ENDS 5PM PST 3/11
PAYMENT: $120 VIA PAYPAL
SAMPLE PAGE: LANDING PAGE SAMPLE
COMPETITOR URLS: 1, 2


PLEASE NOTE: ALL SUBMISSIONS MUST BE MADE TO THE FORUM (PLEASE DO NOT PM SUBMISSIONS) THERE ARE MULTIPLE PEOPLE WHO WILL BE MAKING THE DECISION ON THIS LANDING PAGE.

 

please wait for my entry.

 

My entry:

The entry is watermarked. If you like my designed template, I can show you the less-watermarked image. Thanks!
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Please click the link for higher resolution so you can see clearly the effects.
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falloutvic - that looks almost exactly like the sample I provided. I am not a designer I was just giving an idea of what a legal landing page looks like. I want to see creativity and something that really jumps off the page.

 

I thought we're gonna use the layout you provided, so I added many web 2.0 effects in it. Thanks for the feedback though.
Added: (this is the layout i came up before i misread your instructions). thanks
My another entry.

 

Here's my attempt. Please let me know what you think.

http://imageftw.com/uploads/20110302/Landing.png

 

falloutvic - that still looks too close to the sample I provided.

FallenShadow - I like where you are going with it, but it is not sharp enough for me (it looks like a template which is not what I am looking for)

 

Another entry:
Entry #2

 

I knew you would say that, feedback on my latest work pls?

 

falloutvic - Please look at the samples I provided (I provided links to 2 landing pages I like). I need it to be very sharp and professional and a real "call to action" for the people who see it. Please try again and submit. Thanks!

 

The link I looked at looked like a template, so that's what I did...

So basically you're wanting like, a flyer-esque page? I'll have another design soon.

 

FallenShadow - The links I provided may be template generated (they most likely are) but they have a very clean look that most templates don't. I look forward to your next design.

 

Quick draw up. Feedback is sure to improve the design.

 

Piggy - I like where you are going with the landing page. Can you switch the Free case review box with the "as seen on" box? Also I don't want to just see the page in white (most of the legal landing pages are a little darker). Also please remove the page options at the top of the page (landing page only)

 

What type of color are you looking for?

 

Piggy - Much better. I will get feedback from the other parties involved and post soon.

 

Let me know what you think of this one.
http://imageftw.com/uploads/20110302/4Landing2.png

 

Let me know what you think?
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1760860/DP/edBrainstein.jpg

Thanks,

 

*Wasn't "all there" when I posted original message. Sorry guys.*

 

imagine for what?that's not your trademark. that's the basic of design..anyone can do that