100 $ - Layout packaging design (2D front page only)

My entry :
Design 1:


Design 2:


Design 3:


Thanks for the opportunity , would love to have some feedbacks

 

Hi all,

Thank you very much for joining our contest. We had a long discussion in our company but could not identify a clear winner. We have 4 favourite layouts: watari, coolwanz, Jahid and TDGraphics. I will give you a short update what we like and what we think can be improved.
Watari: We like the heavy colouring you have chosen. The green line was a little bit to much in contrast with the blue background for most people, perhaps you can find another solution for the colouring. Also the font of Selergo can be improved. Perhaps a little bit more the style of TDGraphics.
TDGraphics: We like the very characteristic logo „Selergo“ of our product. But the wording on the package looks untidy, a clearer arragement would be appreciated. Also our Taurus logo has to be used. I have some problems how this layout will look on the horizontal cream box.
Jahid: Your design looks very valuable. You have to know that in German pharmacies the products are presented in 2-3 meters distance from the patients. As you can imagine than the colouring is too light and could not be seen easily by the patients. It might be good to use a stronger (darker) colouring. The product name is a placed in a sticker, nice but improveable.
Coolwanz: We like the waves and the circles on your layout. „Selergo“ could be bigger and perhaps a bit more creative. The colouring could be more intense and a second colour may improve the look.
I hope our comments will help you to go on. I´ll be anxious to see what you will present next time.
Good luck to all
Jutta

 

3 Variations

 

updated entry....



http://www.imgplace.com/directory/dir3634/1197350554.png

 

Updated Box Design as requested (amended to a more contrast/strong
color variations, made the Sellergo name more highlighted and developed
and a 3rd color has been added on the design)
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I am not a designer nor a project opener.I often visit this contests forum to see nice works of you-the designers.I really feel amazed to see your works.All of you are so brilliant and creative!
how can you people make such beautiful designs and from where do u get the ideas?
Is it by born or by your practice?
I wish if i were a designer like you!

 

Vertical box will follow if this style is liked...

 

That's very flattering! Thank you! ...It's not by born, i guess! We all can learn skills.. and by practicing, we can improve it.

 

Hi all,

We are really excited about your excellent work. As already announced the contest will end tomorrow at 4:37 pm our time. We will than inform the winners.
Jutta

 

the last one since i got a few time to make it before deadline
trying with another color....



http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/1723/thelastoneig1.png

 

I will have another in later tommorow Please dont close :.

 

We already added 2 days, so I think its fair to stick to the time frame.
Great creative work, we already had quite long discussions ... so we plan to give some additional benefit from our side.
Ludger

 

wow beautiful work in here guys

 

Okay, lets look at the result.

Long discussion, and not 100 % clear result, as many very nice packages. Great work !!

No 1 goes to JAHID
No 2 – and this is very very close – goes to WATARI
... No 3 goes to Coolwanz and demonhale

But, don´t stop reading.

At No.1 : We still need the „vertical version“
At No 2: We double your fee to $ 30.
At No 3 both: We double your fee to $ 10 each

Please give us your Paypal to send you the money!

And furthermore:

@ JAHID & WATARI: Indeed some further creative work is necessary on this box, and also on another box from this product line. We would like to contact you to dicuss details about the project and fees related to this directly (please give us an email to contact you)

@ Coolwanz and demonhale: We liked your layouts, which could possibly be used for other products in the future. If you are able to provide us with a .PSD or similar vector file, we´ll give you $ 20 in addition

Thanks again to everyone. It was our first project here, but we are very happy about the professional work.

Jutta & Ludger

 

pm sent and gratz to jahid, coolwanz & demonhale. nice works

 

Money sent to jahid & watari, waiting for the 2 others to give info (its evening here, will be done tomorrow)

 

One thing to add, as some guys added a couple of versions:

The exact best boxes were:

Jahid: http://images.tabulas.com/106735/l/Selergo.jpg Type B
Watari: http://www.imgplace.com/directory/dir3599/1197200448.png
coolwanz: http://xs322.xs.to/xs322/07490/sc4img.png

 

Thanks!! PM sent, Payment received... Congratulations to WATARI, COOLWANZ & DEMONHALE

 

congrats to you jahid and also to coolwanz, watari and demonhale nice designs

 

Congratulation to jahid, coolwanz, watari and demonhale
You guys rock! Awesome works...