Sobbi the ball and trophy set your design back. Your strong point is your font . keep the font and try a solid bg rather than the 60% opacity. Hayes is there a way you can incorporate a few white stars on that ribbon that bend/curve with it? (make it look like they are on the fabric)
Here is few designs from me. I will make any revisions you want 1. (full size link http://s24.postimg.org/n9bg7wd6d/image.jpg) 2. (full size link http://s13.postimg.org/mqbx8g55j/image.jpg)
Two more variations 3. (full size link http://s23.postimg.org/bjazgu5nv/image.jpg) 4. (full size link http://s17.postimg.org/irfyczgz3/image.jpg)
Here are my entries for the contest, can provide an unlimited amount of revisions based on your feedback until you're fully satisfied with the outcome. Made 3 variations: http://postimg.org/image/yae9pp0d1/ http://postimg.org/image/qwyvqqgb9/ http://postimg.org/image/v4tnzhhqt/ and another one with the football ball added to the "I": http://postimg.org/image/xrczpywtt/ Feedback is appreciated, thank you!
Gladiatus shrink the font a little and add .com to #1. Also try a different bg and maybe 3d the edges to look like a menu button. Lulian justify left and use the 1060x150. Sobbi make the font larger and you keep centered. Are those chairs on that field??? Shrikant I do not like your colors or fonts. Illidan I do not like that font. I will go 12 more hours with this contest.
@gsd193 thank you for your feedback, here are my revisions, anything can be changed according to your needs: http://postimg.org/image/8lous0atv/ http://postimg.org/image/tdpd88oht/ http://postimg.org/image/g0e6kdwpf/
Revisions: 1- Large fonts 2- Centered 3- There are no chairs, is the equipment used to calibrate the field to keep it in optimal condition. (maintenance equipment for the field) Thanks