$100 fun logo contest - Jagged Mind.

Discussion in 'Design Contests' started by JP Sauve, Mar 6, 2008.

  1. brahman_namharb

    brahman_namharb Peon

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    #21
    when will this end? I will send my entry soon.:cool:
     
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  2. nwsn3twrkshp

    nwsn3twrkshp Well-Known Member

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    #22
    my entry - feedback appreciated
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  3. JP Sauve

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    #23
    While different than what I was asking for, I really like it. In particular I like how the font and graphic fit well, and how the colors blend well. IT's clean, which is always best for a logo. Think a pink brain would give a better impact? Any suggestions on making the brain jagged somehow?

    Envision, is this purely a graphic of your own creation?

    Fatmunter, yours is nice too, but a little too unpolished for our use... I think that's what you were going after though. Kind of has an underground look to it.
     
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  4. JP Sauve

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    #24
    A winner will be selected end of business day on Friday March 14th.
     
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  5. rkquest

    rkquest Well-Known Member

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    #25
    This is tough! :D
    Anyway, here's my attempt..

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    On black background

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  6. envisionIT

    envisionIT Banned

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    #26
    Hmm, well what were you looking for, more simple? Anyway its 100% designed by me from scratch and I think a pink brain would have more of an impact; I just saw your gray brain sample and went with that :)

    I'll get working on the revisions.
     
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  7. JP Sauve

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    #27
    No need for more simple. I was just saying that while it wasn't exactly what I directed, it's pretty darn close. My directions were just suggestions anyway. Either way, your graphic is an excellent direction and is a definite contender. If you're looking for further suggestions, cleaning up the corner lines of the mouth would be nice since it looks like there's 2 mouths overlapped there. And I'm still trying to figure someway of making it more along the JAGGED theme, although I'm at a loss of how you could do it. I don't have an artist's eye though, so perhaps something'll come to you.

    rkquest - it would be nice if the graphic part of the logo would have more character, and cleaner. When trying to go cartoony, often thick inking lines are used.
     
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  8. l3fty

    l3fty Well-Known Member

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    #28
    my second version:

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  9. CnSGD

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    #29
    Here are some revisions.

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  10. lightless

    lightless Notable Member

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    #30
    Add a few sharp spikes in appropriate places maybe ?

    Maybe jutting out of the brain.
     
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  11. rkquest

    rkquest Well-Known Member

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    #31
    Ok. Revisions.

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  12. CnSGD

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    #32
    A few more revisions

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  13. scorpionagency

    scorpionagency Well-Known Member

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    #33
    Any feed back for my entry, or was I completely off track?
     
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  14. l3fty

    l3fty Well-Known Member

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    #34
    jagged-er?

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  15. Ariestoteles

    Ariestoteles Peon

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    #35
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    inspirations : MIND, FUN :D
     
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  16. JP Sauve

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    #36
    Some freeback...

    Ariestoteles - missing the jagges aspect, too mild.

    l3fty - I like your second version the best.

    CNSGD - while appreciate your attempts, but I don't think it's the right direction. Looking for more cartoony and clean. As well, the font and graphic don't mix.

    rkquest - the brain is kind of missing personality. I don't suggest starting with a brain graphic and just adding on it, since it'll look that way, but instead create something from scratch.

    nwsn3 - pretty much the same suggestions as rkquest, but for different reasons. Also, I think the face/brain shouldn't be overshadowed by the text.

    scorpion - I recognize your work, but I don't think it comes out clean enough. Doesn't send a clear cool message.
     
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  17. Ariestoteles

    Ariestoteles Peon

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    #37
    thanks for feedback,

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  18. scorpionagency

    scorpionagency Well-Known Member

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    #38
    Concept #4 - I went with a cleaner look this time

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    - Feedback Appreciated -​
     
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  19. Mr bloggy

    Mr bloggy Active Member

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    #39
    Hi, Im not entering this contest.
    Just want to say that the logos by scorpionagency are easily the best ones here.
    I think you can stop your search.
     
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  20. scorpionagency

    scorpionagency Well-Known Member

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    #40
    Thanks Mr bloggy :)

    I think there is some good talent on this thread, each designer just has different styles in which they express them self.
     
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