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Thanks for the feedback it is really appreciated, revisions: the first version is the the same design I just made the P and T larger than the rest of the letters, and the second version is the digital circle and the spear only design ( I originally designed this digital circle and the spear part of the logo design to show and give a very strong idea of a technical SEO because the spear is also a symbol of an arrow going upwards).
feedback is appreciated and revisions are always welcome.
Thanks.

 

Design variation. Thanks.

 

Thanks for the feedback.
I have since went a different direction with new submission.

 

new font.

 

Design variation. Thanks.

 

@logos4all - I like the spear only design with the larger P and T. I'll show my co-founder and get his feedback. I have no other changes at this time. With your new font submission, you went back to lowercase for most letters, which isn't what we really want. I do think this second font is nicer though.

@Altruist Design - Could you try a block font for the word Press? I love how Titan looks and the logo looks great (and is my co-founder's fav) the fix of the larger P & T look great too, but I'd love to see what a two font look would be like as the extra "flair" on the letters is throwing me off a bit (the blocks at the bottom, and the little straight turns)

@katesrobyn - Not sure what I'm supposed to be looking at here. It looks like there might be a Greek/Roman helmet in there somewhere and a lowercase t? I'm sorry, but it doesn't work for me. The typography is okay, but not ideal either. The font looks simple and not in a positive way and the Caps vs non-caps setup doesn't work in my opinion.

@galalogo - I get what you were going for but this logo could never work. It looks a bit phallic. I love your font for the text, but my co-founder really wants an all capital text set-up. I also really enjoyed your black dot for the I. Good effort. With your second attempt, the issues still exist but you've added wifi lines which I think actually cheapen your design. You have the same issues with your third and fourth attempts. Your fifth attempt is better in many ways but still has the text issue with it not being all in caps. The infinity logo as you have it reminds me of an old Drupal logo which is something we want to avoid as a WordPress shop.

@collegerut - Interesting concept, but I don't know that it works. The flame is interesting, but the circle and two arrows make me think "gender" or cause-based company (like some charity thing or stop fire warning logo...) The font choice looks okay, but the P and T would have to be larger and the font weight is a bit thin.

@getdomain4u - My favourite of this round of submissions is the Second one with the dark blue background. The s from Press and the T from Titan overlap in an "unpleasing to me" way. I also think the i in Titan is tucked under the T and looks off...

@dmax2020 - It looks like you squished a bunch of clipart together and called it a logo. The font in your first attempt says "book publisher" instead of a tech company. Your second one is better but the italics look weird and the letter spacing is off too. The type selected in your third submission also says "book publisher to me".

@iamwiki - We are PressTitan vs PressTitans. I like that you've removed the extra helmet detail and I think it looks better. I still think stylistically the helmet and the digital dots are at odds with each other. I think your second font is much nicer than your first, though I am a sucker for tall text like that, for our brand, the second one works much better.

 

thanks for the feedback. Here is another attempt

 

Hi @davidcubed

Please see my design attached.
I await to hear from you!​

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I will work on that change in about ten hours.