Here is my revised entry, keep in mind that if you choose me I'd be happy to work with you on changes/revisions. Below is what it would look like without the torn edges for visual style, it's your choice.
I PM'ed him about this a few days ago. My guess is he abandoned the contest, and may have stolen one of our ideas.
not really satisfied with entries...i have given correction ...for an entry via PM . awaiting for him to resubmit..so lets c