$100 brochure and business card for a dog hotel - 48h - Payment via paypal

trifold

 

in 3d preview

 

Currently working on it, please don't close it yet. Thanks.

 

biruhato: very nice brochure! Feedback:
* Please try to include the items "terapias", "educação canina" and "taxi dog" in the "inside part", instead of in the back. You can remove one (not more) of the big pictures from the hotel item and shrink some of the big pictures just a bit to make some space for the extra text. I like that currently, the left side of the inside is just for the hotel (wich is our main business) and the right part is for the other services, that will probably change when you do what I'm asking, not sure if there's a way to get around that... If not, that's ok.
* Replacing the "-" characters with some nicer kind of bullet may improve it, like little arrows or even small paw prints
* The paragraphs of text would probably look better if their alignment is set to "justify" instead of being aligned left

 

Update:
I'm extending the contest until tomorrow at 2pm (forum time, GMT -3), so there is no need to get desperate

 

here's my revision for business card...


working on Brochure.. I though it is 2 folds...but biruhato made 3 folds...

 

I'm going to bed now, be back tomorrow around 9am (GMT -3). Good night to all.

ing_pacz: the business card is nice. About the Bruchure, I guess the naming is a bit confuse, the paper should be folded 2 times, so it's divided in 3 parts. In some web sites, they call this kind of brochure "tri-fold". So biruhatu's design is correct.

 

thanks for the feedback..here is my revised entry

 

thanks for you feed backs i have made all the changes and here is a shot on 2d so i can give you both if you want !!

bhodu

 

how about this now?

 

Sorry for the delay, I was busy designing your template. Here is my first submission with the changes you wanted:

And here's a second version:

Feedback please, I can make any changes you want.

 

here is the revised business card color:

 

Good morning everyone. I don't think I will be able to provide such detailed feedback for all entries as I've been doing in the last 2 days because there are a lot of entries and I would need like 6 hands to provide feedback to all in real time . Also, I'll try to be a bit more direct...

Wow, that's a lot of revisions, don't you people sleep at all?

I'll be posting feedback in a moment.

 

Update
Firstly, thank you everyone for all your patience and willingness to do multiple revisions.

So far, biruhato (brochure and business card), DearaDesigns (business card), and ing_pacz (business card) are leading this contest (not neccessarily in that order!). However, a lot of people haven't submitted their entries yet (and I'm waiting), so the result of the contest is still completely uncertain.

I'm trying to give feedback to everyone (whether I like their designs or not) because you spend a lot of time and effort designing so I feel the least I can do is provide you with feedback. The reason I'm telling you who is leading the contest so far is so that the designers (who are not among the top 3 that I just mentioned) who already posted their entries and are doing lots of revisions may decide whether to continue revising or not, or even coming up with something new. Thank you so far for all your work.

The contest will probably be extended for a few more hours because some of you haven't posted the brochures yet. As I said, nothing is decided yet, so I'm looking forward for the revisions and new entries.

raju143: your work has improved a lot in these final revisions. But still, not quite what we're looking for. Sorry...

ing_pacz: very nice work, very clean and professional and still not overly serious. Would be nice to see a brochure.

DearaDesigns: very nice business card (the one on the top, without the orange stripe), great job on integrating the logo. Would be nice to see a brochure. My suggestion is not to go excessively cartoonish on the brochure.

bhoduarts: nice business card, however, it's important that the services remain in the original order because the most important ones come first. Anyway, the design is nice. Are you submitting a brochure?

biruhato: great work, both business card and brochure are very nice and have nothing else to change.

 

Anyone else is submitting a brochure and needs some more hours to work on it?

 

wait for my entry please :S

 

I'm extending the deadline until tomorrow (22th) 11am (forum time, GMT -3) so those of you who are still working on the brochure have some more time. Good night to all, get some sleep .

 

my try...Hope you like it...

 

I've started the brochure, this is a concept idea:
http://i906.photobucket.com/albums/ac264/a7092015/brochuredoghotel.jpg

http://i906.photobucket.com/albums/ac264/a7092015/brochuredogtemplate2.jpg
Please tell me if you like it or not, if you like it I'll continue with it, if not, I don't think that I'll be able the design another one before the deadline arrives :S I can mae any change, in this one.

 

Hi, here is my brochure entry,

http://i736.photobucket.com/albums/xx5/vashadesign/paraprev.jpg

Let me know your thoughts about this design. Thanks.