$100.00 Foreclosure Help Flyer Design

***I am posting this contest on behalf of users WaterBottle and Moyopoyo. They are unable to post in this forum because they were banned for having the same IP address [they are brothers and live in the same household]. Both of these users have paid many contest winners in the past and this one will be no exception.***

I am looking for a postcard design to advertise my a foreclosure help business.

The name of the company is Fisch*er Financial Services

The logo is below:

(If you think the logo is too small, just use it for now, and I'll send the high res one to you when we're done. )

Here is our current flyer just to give you an idea of what we're looking for, but better:


Requirements:
-Only make a one sided flyer. DO NOT MAKE TWO SIDES.
-Phone number must be on the front of the flyer. Phone number is 800-420-6086
-Must be eye catchy, but don't make it look like a scam. A nice, clean, and professional look will be best.
-I might like something like a nice smooth grass hill and a cloudy background, or even a nice house, or ugly house... Any good concept will work.
-The size should be EXACTLY 6.125" x 4.125" resolution.

 

My entry

Tried to follow your guidelines as much a possible! All images are royalty free. If you want changes made, feel free to ask!

Click the preview below...



Thanks,

Jack

 

here are my entries feedback apreciated

 

Thank you for your replies rakha and saxDesigns. I will share feedback soon.

Others-please enter. This is a quick $100. We pay the winner by paypal very promptly. We are already working with 3 other Digital Point designers who have won past contests with us on designs for our other business. This is an opportunity for continued work.

FUTURE ENTRANTS: PLEASE NOTE THAT IN LINE 4 OF THE INSPIRATION FLYER, SPELLING SHOULD BE CORRECTED FROM "PRINIPALS" TO "PRINCIPALS"

 

I am in..pls. wait for my entry....... will post in a while. Thank you

 

Something quick from me:



Feedback appreciated,
original is 6.125" x 4.125" at 300dpi (for printing)

 

Something quick I came up with:



Need anything changed, just ask

 

Hello...

I'm new to this forum. I cant post my image url. I have sent the image URL on PM.

Thanks
Arief

 

REVISED entry!.. open for suggestion.

 

Mansur:

-Please change the "DON'T LOOSE YOUR HOME!" part to RED letters.
-Make the logo's blue color be a lighter blue so it goes with the flyer better.
-Make the logo bigger.
-Change the number to 1-800-420-6086
-Add the domain www.fischerfinancial.com to the flyer somewhere.

willhaynes:

-Change the line that says, "Don't Lost Your Beautiful Home!" to "Fischer Financial Services".
-Change the line that says, "Let us help you through the depression" to "Let us help you save your home!". Keep it all grey.
-Change the "We Can" to "We can help you:"
-Put a hyphen after the number 1
-Add the domain www.fischerfinancial.com to the flyer somewhere.

rakha:

-Try to put the logo at the top right or top left. I don't like where it is now.
-I like the second color combo better, don't bother posting the first one again.
-Change the "Let Our Loss Mitigation Staff Help You" to "We can help:"
-Please change the blue in the logo to a lighter blue color so it coordinates with the flyer better.
-Add the domain www.fischerfinancial.com to the flyer somewhere.
-Please post the revision with the above changes, and one more with the "DON'T LOSE YOUR HOME" in red text.
-I really like how you turned this flyer sideways. Great idea.

katesrobyn:

-Sorry, the concept is nice but the cartoon look seems too childish for what we're going for. Thanks for the entry.

Sax:

-I need to see more of the flyer to consider your entry.

DZKStudios:

-Sorry, I don't like it at all. Thanks for the entry.

Thanks for the nice entries everyone! Will provide feedback on any new entries. I'm going to choose the winner and pay by Friday evening. I will also give the winner future work. Keep them coming!

 

I like this image, if possible, I'd like to see this incorporated in some designs.

 

thanks for the feedback here is an update on mine

 

thank you for feedback here are the changes and also added the image u suggested feedback apreciated thanks!!

 

thanks... will post revision...........

 

Will Post my revision either Tomorrow or Wednesday

 

Did you click on it? It was a thumbnail!

Here is is fullscreen...



Thanks,

Jack

 

Hi, here's my revision... my theme "happy and light feelin'" postcard.. not too corporate ......... open for suggestion.

 

Here's another proposal;

 

Chacha Guide : in what dpi resolution do u want the flyer? Awaiting for your reply. enquiryvcs