$100.00 1 page layout - mortgage group site for veterans - GUARANTEED.

soldiers are good, tanks may be too much.

 

my entry

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Feedback appreciated

Let me know!
Will

 

Okay ..i re-post

 

i will try to enter

 

I'll enter.

 

@DeSHea - thanks for the invitation really do appreciate this.

hope i can make it on the deadline.....

 

thank you for everyone entering. I am sorry I couldn't get back sooner, usually during the weekend it's difficult to find some time to talk.

anyways, back to business:

@shinan - it still looks too much like our current website, we are trying to steer away from that. I will not have a video, nor will it say the same phrase as what is there now. Please take away the hand of the house, it makes it look a little weird. How about something referring to the military there?

We need two places for content - one for gateway mortgage and one to explain the VA loan.

What we will keep from the original site:
Mortgage calculator
Contact me about a loan
Home Finding service link with pic
Equal housing opportunity logo

To add: 4 military symbols I uploaded somewhere at the bottom of the home page.

Next,

@willhaynes - this is more of what we are looking for. We need more room for text content - 2 areas - one about gateway mortgage and one about VA Loan.

We need to add something to the logo that stands out "For Veterans".

This is all I have so far. Fix this and we will go further with details.

TO everyone else thinking about entering - ENTER!

 

my entry

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http://i41.tinypic.com/303lmjn.png

 

btw if you could wait for my entry i will get it done. im currentky engaged in one project and hope to finish my entry 36 hours from now thanks. ill definitely go for this one. thanks

 

@ eranet very nice. clean, but efficient. Can you add those military icons I uploaded?

@jay2xtreme - Yes, we will be waiting.

 

my shot on this hope it fits your brief and your taste

Thanks

 

@jay2extreme - looks VERY nice! Awaiting more feedback from my partner.

 

here you go updated version

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http://i44.tinypic.com/wb2r00.png

 

Jay, why does it come that I never can see your designs on every contest?

 

Looks like the CH got banned.

Hopefully this contest is still open

Will

 

Im engagaged in my project in work as a web designer and css integrator in a cms company. i do contest during my freetime.

 

No, I mean like> Why cant I see the designs you are posting

Thanks =D
P.S The CH got banned

 

lets rephrase the grammar "why does i can never see your design in every contest." I use imagehosting.com for uploading my image that redirects to imageshack the site, maybe cannot be accessed on your area

 

ops , he is Banned :S

so what will happen to this contest now ?