$10 Logo Design (48 hours)

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  1. Digital Noise

    Digital Noise Well-Known Member

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    #21
    @offiri0: When you think of the word, Astonish, what is the first image to come to your mind? That's what I am trying to find with this logo. Your current logo is too blue, and really gives more of the feeling of fun and crazy (the unbalanced "A" and "W" give that effect). I think in order for you to create a logo that wow's people you need to add a graphic that plays with the mind--just a thought. Hope this helps, and let me know if you have any more questions.
     
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  2. redlust.

    redlust. Active Member

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    #22
    Mine:
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    Feedback would be great :D
     
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  3. dezine_gen

    dezine_gen Peon

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    #23
    Here's the updated one. Working on other possible color combinations. 'll upload that ASAP they are ready. Comments makes me more perfect. Thanks in advance.

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  4. Digital Noise

    Digital Noise Well-Known Member

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    #24
    @redlust: Very good! You are on the right track. A few suggestions, though. First, could you try something other than leaves (fireworks, stars, abstract objects, to name a few). Also, when you do try different items make sure that the object doesn't show up in the base reflection. It seems that the current leaves are lightly showing above the "S" and "T" reflection. Also, could you try a few different fonts for the domain name. The one you currently are using seems bland. Thanks!
    @dezine_gen: Thanks for adding the slogan. However, concerning the font on "web" it seems that you only bolded the word. Could you try a completely different font for the "web.com" part of the logo? Thanks.
     
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  5. redlust.

    redlust. Active Member

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    #25
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    No Reflection:
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    I couldn't find/make any stars/fireworks that fit with the style of the logo
    so I tried something different as the image. I think the text looks loads better, thanks for the suggestion :)
     
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  6. offiri0

    offiri0 Peon

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    #26
    [​IMG]
     
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  7. Digital Noise

    Digital Noise Well-Known Member

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    #27
    @redlust: Way to take my advice and improve upon it. I am HUGE fan of 2aag0ib.png. Well done, well done!!!
     
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    redlust. Active Member

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    #28
    Thanks a lot :)
    *crosses fingers*

    :p

    I noticed the white reflection was messed up on the A, I fixed it :)
    [​IMG]
     
    redlust., Jun 18, 2008 IP
  9. Digital Noise

    Digital Noise Well-Known Member

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    #29
    @offiri0: Nice Job! Quite the improvement from your last logo. Not sure if I am a fan of the color scheme, though (instead of the green-ish blue, you might want to try a dark blue or light orange with the red). Also, I don't really care for the splash look. Try removing it out and just have a spray of stars.
     
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  10. offiri0

    offiri0 Peon

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    #30
    thanks for the feedback

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    dezine_gen Peon

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    #31
    Here is the logo with font and color changed. Feedback plz!

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  12. Digital Noise

    Digital Noise Well-Known Member

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    #32
    @offiri0: Perfect! You and redlust are in the top running.
    @dezine_gen: I really like your design, but it's still not working. I like the two tone color to astonish_font.png. However, the font and the color for "web.com" is struggling. Can you try a cursive red font for this. I really think that is the missing element for this logo.
     
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  13. Contrarian

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    #33
    Good job, the "a" in "dazzling" looks like an "o" so it looks like "dozzling"
    It was the first thing I noticed :rolleyes:
     
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  14. Hecky

    Hecky Like a Dungeon Dragon!

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    #34
    I'll do an entry now, so wait up please!
     
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  15. Hecky

    Hecky Like a Dungeon Dragon!

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    #35
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    #36
    my entry:

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    dezine_gen Peon

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    #37

    thnx, comments help a lot!
     
    dezine_gen, Jun 18, 2008 IP
  18. dezine_gen

    dezine_gen Peon

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    #38
    Here's the changed one.

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  19. dezine_gen

    dezine_gen Peon

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    #39
    a bit different one.

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  20. Digital Noise

    Digital Noise Well-Known Member

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    #40
    @Contrarian: Thanks for sharing this insight, I didn't even notice it.
    @Hecky: Too generic of a logo.
    @George-creative: Too dark and evil looking for my taste.
    @dezine_gen: Fantastic, I really like astonish01.png! Thanks for working with me on the changes.
     
    Digital Noise, Jun 18, 2008 IP