Hiya Everyone I am in the process of writing up the text for a printed flyer to promote my services, and I am stuck at the headline and sub-headline. I haven't got very far have I lol? Anyway, I was wondering if anyone here could come up with a good headline and sub headline for a quick $10 in their paypal account. The flyer is to promote my website here, which is still work in progress so it's pretty empty. Here are a couple of headlines I came up with, so you can see what I am kind of looking for: None of these seemed quite right to me, but you can try combining them to come up with different combination of words. Or make up something totally different. I am in a bit of a hurry for this, so the first person to come up with something catchy and attention grabbing will win. Look forward to seeing what you come up with. Thanks EDIT: I am looking to attract both small businesses and individuals such as freelance writers, so the headline shouldn't contain the word "business". But should attract both at the same time.
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Head: You Don't Have to be a Celeb to be Famous Online! Sub Head : Get an Efficient & Reliable Website Design and Get Noticed In Cyberspace.
Thanks for the entries lordjeri and rockerdish @lordjeri - thanks, but am looking for something a little more..... @rockerdish - Thats brilliant thanks ... will wait a couple more hours, but I definitely like that one.
Thanks donde and twotango. However, the potential clients won't have a website already so "giving your site a makeover" won't really attact them, and neither will "we bring the world to your website".
Another one from me.... Head: Want To Be a Celeb in Cyberspace? Sub Head: Elegant Website Designs To Showcase Yourself To The World.
Hmmm ..... juicy. Here are some ideas. Headline : Why should your website look anything less than the best? Subheading : Smart website design for discriminating individuals Headline : Want a professional looking and highly functional website in a matter of days? Subheadline : Avail of our quality web design service that's more affordable than it should be. Headline : Get noticed online with a great looking website! Subheadline : That doesn't cost half as much as it should For the below one, the words inside [ ] are optional (If you're the conservative type ). Headline : Do you want a hot [and sexy] website that attracts attention like a [nude] supermodel? Subheadline : Fast, affordable and super-attractive web design is now just a click away!
These are my favorite two so far . rockerdish - Still liking yours Lightless - I like your one, It short sweet and straight to the point. Would like to maybe see a couple more like it. It is getting late here, and will announce the winner when I wake up in the morning. Thanks for all the great entries so far, feel free to suggest some more for me. Thanks
Here are a few more Head : Want a website that stands out and looks great while doing it? Subhead: Try our website design services and we guarantee that you won't regret it Head : Looking for affordable and elegant website design? Subhead: Don't waste any more time looking for it! What you want is right here! Head : Fact : Cheap poor quality website design is the number one reason for lost clients Subhead : Don't become part of the statistic, try our efficient and reliable website design services!
Thanks for all the entries . The winner is - lightless. Could you send you me your paypal details when you read this, and I will send your $10. The winning entry was : Thanks everyone else for entering Rockerdish - Can you also send me your paypal account - Gonna send you $5 for a very close second