Contest 1 Page Sales Page Design Needed $200

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  1. Dave90210

    Dave90210 Well-Known Member

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    #21
    jnjnnino
    Here's the feedback, remove the buy now button from the header, Try another font where it says before and only close to the top of the page, other than that I don't see any modifications at this time
     
    Last edited: Aug 27, 2010
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  2. malditah

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    #22
    i'll send my another entry later...
     
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    vinpkl Active Member

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    #23
    entry sent to your PM

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    FEEDBACK APPRECIATED

    VINEET
     
    vinpkl, Aug 27, 2010 IP
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    Todd Duquette Well-Known Member

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    #24

    Can you please upload to another host. I suggest Deviantart.net
     
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    Dave90210 Well-Known Member

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    #25
    I sent you feedback in private message please confirm


     
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    #26
    lol, why are you asking him to upload to another host?

    when will the contest ends?
     
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    vinpkl Active Member

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    #27
    hi dave

    i have received the feedback and sent you revision also

    please check and reply back

    vineet
     
    vinpkl, Aug 27, 2010 IP
  8. Dave90210

    Dave90210 Well-Known Member

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    #28
    Few more days. I'm waiting for a few people to enter that said they where going to enter
     
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    DearaDesigns, Aug 28, 2010 IP
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    Dave90210 Well-Known Member

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    #30
    Feedback; I like the color of the site, my suggestions is to try a different font other than the hand writting font, also where it says $199 have a line go through the $199. The ebooks seem blurry make them more sharper. Also make the name Total Relaxation kit text in the header stand out more.


     
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    #31
    My revision: http://yfrog.com/83relaxkittempp
    Thanks for your feedback, all changes have been made except from the image shapening, I coudn't make them even sharper than they are, sorry.
     
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  12. jnjnnino

    jnjnnino Well-Known Member

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    #32
    hi dave, thanks for the feedback.. will do the changes requested... im just totally pissed off with my internet provider.. been 2 days now and i can't go online... damn... sorry if am too expressive...
     
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    jnjnnino Well-Known Member

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    #33
    revised entry sent pm... please provide feedback thanks..
     
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    #34
    VashaDesign won this contest...i placed second, thanks again! sending files now.
     
    malditah, Sep 1, 2010 IP