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Please Review My Realestate Blog

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by guru16, Dec 1, 2008.

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  1. #1
    Hi,

    I set a realestate investing blog up and wrote around 8 articles let me know what you think good and bad of course it's just the normal wordrpess theme for now will make it prettier soon and if you don't mind tell me if you find any spelling and gramma errors thanx :cool:

    it is located here:

    http://www.realestateinvestingaustralia.com
     
    guru16, Dec 1, 2008 IP
  2. kingofsanda

    kingofsanda Peon

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    #2
    The blog looks plain, you should get a professional theme and add some graphics
    into the header and the body of the page.
     
    kingofsanda, Dec 1, 2008 IP
  3. guru16

    guru16 Well-Known Member

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    thanx for your input and yes I am getting a customized theme built it was only setup a day and a half ago want to know if theres any spelling grammatical errors that are obvoius.
     
    guru16, Dec 1, 2008 IP
  4. zambosayaff

    zambosayaff Banned

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    #4
    template is nice, simple loy out looks professional. One more lacking.. your logo to make it more professional..
     
    zambosayaff, Dec 1, 2008 IP
  5. river

    river Active Member

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    You need to implement periods in those paragraphs. You sentences are way too long, they don't read right.
     
    river, Dec 2, 2008 IP
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    seo_cel Banned

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    The template looks good. It would look better if you try to add some design on it or add some more colors. I would also suggest you to change your font style and make them all the same. Adding some images would also make your blog look more nice.
     
    seo_cel, Dec 2, 2008 IP
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    lycos Well-Known Member

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    Hmm...Just try with different templates and see how it goes. The current one looks too plain and generic. Some images would help as well.
     
    lycos, Dec 2, 2008 IP
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    #8
    One of the replies already mentioned this. Your text is too hard to read.

    You have very few full stops (periods as they say in the US), and few if any commas.

    Your spelling looks ok from what I see, but you really do need to punctuate if you want to hold the attention of your visitors.
     
    odls, Dec 2, 2008 IP