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Please Review my Fat Loss Site

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by cb2mall, Nov 21, 2008.

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    cb2mall, Nov 21, 2008 IP
  2. kingofsanda

    kingofsanda Peon

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    The layout and design is nice but I think the header is too large.
     
    kingofsanda, Nov 21, 2008 IP
  3. mafiagame

    mafiagame Active Member

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    yeah thats correct, large header, and large menu links,
    menu needs defferent backgroung color.

    overall good for one day work
     
    mafiagame, Nov 21, 2008 IP
  4. nvjames

    nvjames Peon

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    Not sure what your plan is for this site, flipping, keeping, earning then flipping but this means nothing to me as a visitor...

    "For complete articles & top products on fat loss, weight loss, obesity, diet loss."

    Kick it up a notch using some copy. Maybe these are your keywords not sure the purpose of this subhead but it does nothing to draw the reader into your site to want to check it out.

    "Our insiders weight loss diary's reveal proven products for fat loss, weight loss, a life of obesity and diet loss."

    Copy can be as easy as swipe files or locating hot selling products changing out there headlines, subheads and copy.

    find enquire magazine online...check best selling weight loss books on amazon for catchy titles or copy..change it out to make it you own. It's that easy if you hate writing copy or can't hire it out.

    Here's a CB product in your target.

    top secret fat loss secret DOT com

    ( kill the spaces, in other words all one domain, to visit the site and of course .com )

    turn..

    "blows the lid off the conspiracy to keep you unhealthy, fat & just plain sick..."

    Into....

    I'm exposing the true conspiracy of why your unhealthy, bloated & living a life of sickness..."

    Or...

    "This website exposes the true conspiracy of why THEY want you to stay sick, fat & just plain unhealthy!"
     
    nvjames, Nov 21, 2008 IP
  5. Matthewbb

    Matthewbb Greenhorn

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    makes me want a milk shake

    but the colors stand out
     
    Matthewbb, Nov 21, 2008 IP
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    Aforizmalar Guest

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    header must be deleted. design is fresh and it is easy to navigate.

    you must use some images in your posts. it is really boring to read long texts.
     
    Aforizmalar, Nov 21, 2008 IP
  7. 2advance

    2advance Well-Known Member

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    I like the layout, attractive colors, good placement for ads.. really a good site which gives useful information... good..keep it up!..
     
    2advance, Nov 21, 2008 IP
  8. cb2mall

    cb2mall Active Member

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    Thanks for your comment. I have incorporate one of your ideas. Thanks once again.
     
    cb2mall, Nov 22, 2008 IP
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    mrhrk01 Well-Known Member

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    Nice logo, nice site, well organised, and easy to navigate.

    I would recomend adding a fav icon

    Best of luck with the site!

    Kind Regards
     
    mrhrk01, Dec 31, 2008 IP
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    prosperity66 Active Member

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    Hi :)

    I like the header - however a bit too large in my opinion too.
    But, you should change the peel ad for something that matches the niche of the site... not sure that someone looking for weight loss info would be interested by making money with wordpress.
    Also, you forgot to add a space between contact and us ;-)
    Have a happy new year!!!
     
    prosperity66, Dec 31, 2008 IP
  11. reddik0976

    reddik0976 Peon

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    #11
    good navigation, design, need improvement in terms of SEO
     
    reddik0976, Jan 1, 2009 IP
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    rizals Active Member

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    good desain sir. i like your blog :)
     
    rizals, Apr 24, 2010 IP
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    tipuwani Peon

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    Yeah, u shud remove this large header with a small header and put either some important topic titles, or ad banners!
     
    tipuwani, Apr 24, 2010 IP