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Please Review My Sales Letter (website )

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by shyren, Oct 19, 2008.

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  1. #1
    Hi guys,
    What do you think about this?

    http://wealthymembers.com

    do you feel that the sales letter is good enough to convert visitors into buyers ??

    Also, is the price 499$ reasonable???

    I am not selling only an ebook, The buyers will get a website, ebook (report to earn money through affiliates) and domain and hosting..

    Should the price be more or less ???

    Any short comings in letter itself ???

    Please take a look and please review it.

    Be frank and honest.

    Replies would be greatly appreciated.

    Thank you all..
     
    shyren, Oct 19, 2008 IP
  2. youngboy222

    youngboy222 Banned

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    Though I am not the sort of guy who would be interested in this. But anyone who have some interest in this ebook might end up buying it. you can have atleast 55 % success with this sales copy.

    But there is room for improvement too.
     
    youngboy222, Oct 19, 2008 IP
  3. shyren

    shyren Banned

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    Room for improvement ?? Where should i improve?? any other ideas ??
     
    shyren, Oct 21, 2008 IP
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    justinlorder Peon

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    I think it is a typical landing page rather than a "sales letter" .
     
    justinlorder, Oct 21, 2008 IP
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    casinodesignx Peon

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    I agree, just another typical landing page design, feel like scammer website :))
     
    casinodesignx, Oct 21, 2008 IP
  6. mohdazree

    mohdazree Peon

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    i think 100 visitor,5 can convert into buyer.. need to be more information about this website doing.. nice job..:D
     
    mohdazree, Oct 22, 2008 IP
  7. shyren

    shyren Banned

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    what could i do to make it look like a "sales letter" and not a scammer website ??:confused:
     
    shyren, Oct 25, 2008 IP
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    skindu26 Well-Known Member

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    yes, this guy is a scammer...please check his iTraders before you deal with him exposing his breadth
     
    skindu26, Nov 4, 2008 IP