Please Review my web page

Discussion in 'Websites' started by Asso, Oct 5, 2008.

  1. #1
    Hi,

    I just started building a new clickbank website for a sucesfull product i sell from a long time.

    This is the new website www.seoheaven.net

    I know a have a lot of work to do before i launch this website because it is not ready yet , I have to work on the content and design.

    But every suggestion would be appreciated
     
    Asso, Oct 5, 2008 IP
  2. pat J

    pat J Peon

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    #2
    Well, it does look a little bit amateurish right now. Have you considered using a clean wordpress theme and then just modify it a little bit?
     
    pat J, Oct 5, 2008 IP
  3. Seedirght

    Seedirght Peon

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    #3
    i think that your site is good but you need use more colors and change te organize. You must add pictures and videos and more classes. I give you 5 points to 10.
     
    Seedirght, Oct 5, 2008 IP
  4. luckychan

    luckychan Guest

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    #4
    your website have too few CSS styles. we have 2008 so please stop using tables!

    try out to code in XHTML and CSS. it's easy and professional.
     
    luckychan, Oct 5, 2008 IP
  5. zerocooler

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    #5
    Just not enough there. It has that appearance of a site getting ready to scam the next user to purchase something. A professional template and more content would really drive the site.
     
    zerocooler, Oct 5, 2008 IP
  6. kingofsanda

    kingofsanda Peon

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    #6
    The design does not look professional you should get a professional template
    and add some testimonials from a few satisfied customers to the page.
     
    kingofsanda, Oct 5, 2008 IP
  7. Asso

    Asso Well-Known Member

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    Thank you soo much , I appreciate all your feed back
     
    Asso, Oct 6, 2008 IP
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    tigrrra Well-Known Member

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    #8
    site looks ok you might want to develop some more pages it looks simple with just the main page and the contact page.
     
    tigrrra, Oct 6, 2008 IP
  9. nasi

    nasi Active Member

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    is that link farm?
     
    nasi, Oct 6, 2008 IP
  10. Ecreation

    Ecreation Active Member

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    You should get a better template. This one does not look very professional.4/10.
     
    Ecreation, Oct 6, 2008 IP
  11. m_b

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    Yes, first of all change the template. Try to give a professional look with your template.
     
    m_b, Oct 6, 2008 IP
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    bobbym Well-Known Member

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    #12
    only thing you need to change is template
     
    bobbym, Oct 6, 2008 IP
  13. johnsonnthomas

    johnsonnthomas Banned

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    #13
    Your website is good but according to SEO point of view its needed lot of work...
     
    johnsonnthomas, Oct 7, 2008 IP
  14. daviddalian

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    #14
    The design does not look professional you need to change template
     
    daviddalian, Oct 10, 2008 IP
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    totally agree that your website needing to change template. I wouldn't give any business to a website that looks like this. it doesn't look 'trustable' to me.
     
    doremi, Oct 10, 2008 IP
  16. MrUnloadingzone

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    #16
    Basically, I agree with other comments. As you've said, it needs some work.

    When I clicked on the link and the page popped up, my eyes obviously gravitated to your header and logo. This is just the first thought that came into my head, but the two white vertical lines looked like jail bars! My first reaction was that the person was in jail.

    I know it's an odd comment to get, but that's how it struck me. Considering the intent of the site, maybe a friendlier logo? Or it could just be me.

    Question, since you would be the expert: Your copy suggests that I would write one article and THAT ONE ARTICLE would appear on multiple blogs. Doesn't Google penalize you for posting duplicate content?

    Since you said you've been successful at this for a while, I assume you have a work-around like Smorty's. (who I do NOT recommend at all from experience). If you do, then I would change the wording because that would scare me away. If you don't and you've been successful, does that mean Google does NOT care about duplicate content?

    Thanks in advance and good luck with the new blog and continued success!

    Sincerely,

    Mr. Unloadingzone
     
    MrUnloadingzone, Oct 10, 2008 IP
  17. -=PKG=-

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    #17
    hmm you need to spend some time to make this site attractive, try to organize the data and restructure the everything and also careful in choosing colors or you can pick up any free template that suits your needs
     
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    #18
    Too simple look. Give it a professional look.
     
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  19. Tabby30

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    #19
    I like the Logo heading, its great. The titles need to be in a different format and there are spelling mistakes. I don't think it explains things totally clearly either. A bit more work and I'm sure you'll have a good site
    Sincerely
    Tabby30;)
     
    Tabby30, Oct 10, 2008 IP
  20. ceweqsakti

    ceweqsakti Banned

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    #20
    Good Clickbank site
    Two thumbs up for you
    make a new LOGo friend
     
    ceweqsakti, Oct 11, 2008 IP