$40 S-I-M-P-L-E Postcard Contest 48hrs

Thanks for the feedback - I think the problem a lot of people are actually having is working with your logo
as clearly the card you presented has a clearer, more defined, and business minded appeal to it. While the
card you've presented is nice - I have this image in my head of you wanting more red than white ............

 

I think you're right. I think I prefer more red than white. However, if the design looks good I think I will also be 100% ok with just as much white.

 

My last entry:

 

thanks for the sample.... i will re-post again .......... i think coolwanz in is the other website contest

 

Here's now, I hope u like it

 

my entry


feedback appreciated

 

TDGraphics: thanks for the entry. Probably the best so far but still a little underdeveloped. It is heading in the right direction but I feel it is somehow a little weak. Needs to be developed more.

TightWad: I appreciate the entry but still not there. Thanks for the effort.

offiri0: definitely getting better but only a slight improvement. I think it needs to be developed more to have that knockout punch

katesrobyn: thanks for the new one but still not there. It's a little frustrating for me to see your entries because I have seen some of your other works and you come up with really great designs but this is not one of your better works. The globe you used is not that great and the rest of the design doesn't seem to flow together well. I can clearly see proteindirect but not world class proteins. The background still looks a little plain and undeveloped.

jamess: thanks for the entry but not exactly what I am after. It is a pleasant entry but I need to have more of the world class theme incorporated somehow. Also the slogan appears too small and there seems to be a touch too much empty space. I need something with a little more power, a little more impact.

 

offiri0- Do you have a original thought in your mind?

 

Another try:

 

hello there
here is mine



thanks

 

offiri0: that's an improvement and going in the right direction though not fully there

tightwad: also getting better and closer to what I am after.

allofall: thanks for the entry but not what I am after. The globe somehow doesn't fit with the design and also the slogan is not as readable as it should be.

 

okay.. will try again... thanks

Here's now..

 

Another entry:

 

katesrobyn: sorry but this is still not heading in the right direction

TightWad: I actually prefer one of your previous entries. This looks just a bit too much web2ish for my liking

To anyone else considering this: Contest closes in about 2hrs from this post after which I will pick a winner.

 

Couple of quick entries, waiting for it to stop raining before i go out! They are simple, I know!





Cheers,
Davey.

 

my entry before your deadline time

 

davey, they both look good and stylish but somehow a little simple. Pleasant designs but they seem to somehow miss that world class theme

watari, thanks for the entry but it looks a little unusual without the mini slogan on top of the globe. I appreciate the Australian map in the background but I was after a world class image more than an Australian image.

I once again want to thank everyone who participated but unfortunately this is one of those VERY rare occasions where I can't use any of the designs. There were some designs with great elements, but overall none of the designs was FULLY suitable. To be fair I got someone else to choose which design they liked best they decided the winner is TightWad #32. TightWad please pm me so I can send you the $20 but you don't have to send any files accross.