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Discussion in 'Websites' started by AhDanZ, Sep 10, 2008.

  1. #1
    Do help review my Broken Closet and let me know where I can improve on the design and layout :)
     
    AhDanZ, Sep 10, 2008 IP
  2. Ben-AceofTech

    Ben-AceofTech Active Member

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    First Impression: Good design, nice layout... very catchy. Nothing to improve here, nice job.

    Second Impression: Took me awhile to find other Tee Shirts. The few I found of the homepage were nice, but in an attempt to find others, it took me awhile, plus lots of page reloading on your pop-down bar. Consider a AJAX plugin there possibly...?

    Third Impression: From a webmasters point of view, like me, my initial though on the homepage is that your banner for the store on the far right is an ad, but after examination, its not. Maybe consider making a new banner there that fits in with the colors more, you know? Gradient the corner up, change the text color, it would look so much more natural and I wouldn't have to hesitate before I click.

    Overall Thoughts: Great websites you have there and it clearly looks like you've put time and effort into it, but one thing I'd love to see there, maybe a article in your navigation bar "Why you should buy from us." Personally, I prefer to buy my shirts locally and at stores, but if you had a convincing article I could read right off the bat, you might get me. Also, I didn't notice any ads there, but I imagine you already make a good profit from the shirts. Maybe consider one small Google Adsense ad in the right sidebar.

    Cheers,
    Ben
     
    Ben-AceofTech, Sep 10, 2008 IP
  3. AhDanZ

    AhDanZ Peon

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    Thanks a lot Ben for the review :)

    Regarding the 'Why You Should Buy From Us', I've decided to donate 50% of all my monthly sales to the charity. (Updated on blog)
    Hoping to create a place where peeps can shop and still contributing to the society.

    I'll re-design the banner :)
    When I first place it there, I do have a concern about people mistaking it for advertisement. Will try to create a design that blends with overall layout yet attracts attention!

    Actually there's only 2 design on the site for now as previously I'm printing my own T-Shirt and selling them on eBay. But decided to shift over to PrintPerfection as to cut down overhead for myself.
    Will update with more design soon :D

    Thank for this precious feedback!
    Appreciate it.

    Do hope to hear more feedback so I can keep on improving as I move on :)
     
    AhDanZ, Sep 10, 2008 IP
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    services84 Banned

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    #4
    Gud site layout and design...

    Thanks
     
    services84, Sep 10, 2008 IP
  5. papayamilkshake

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    #5
    getting a personal logo will be a good idea in promoting your own branding ;)
     
    papayamilkshake, Sep 10, 2008 IP
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    #6
    It looks alright but you might want to work on the grammer if your going to be trying to sell goods on the site. Good luck!
     
    beamin1, Sep 11, 2008 IP
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    hadi3366 Banned

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    #7
    Nice site , full of information, but you need to work on the logo
     
    hadi3366, Sep 11, 2008 IP
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    i like but your theme is everywhere, you can change it or improve it
     
    enkass132, Sep 11, 2008 IP
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    #9
    I would recomend a new head banner and the left sidebar is also allittle to scitzo.
     
    lslimport, Sep 11, 2008 IP
  10. AhDanZ

    AhDanZ Peon

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    Thanks alot for the comments and review :) will work on it and improve it!
     
    AhDanZ, Sep 11, 2008 IP
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    ...and lastly please clean out the code - you have 233 errors on your page :eek:
     
    Uzi Levitovitch, Sep 11, 2008 IP
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    #12
    The design of the site is nicely done. Cool shirts design!
     
    mikahjuston, Sep 11, 2008 IP
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    #13
    You should get a more original theme for the site and get
    a professional logo.
     
    kingofsanda, Sep 11, 2008 IP
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    i will rate ur site 10 out of 10 its perfect
     
    webmaster007k, Sep 11, 2008 IP
  15. AhDanZ

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    You mean 233 number of error? :eek: can show me the screen shot?

    Will get the logo done up asap :)
     
    AhDanZ, Sep 12, 2008 IP
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    Onesite Guest

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    I don't know if it is just me, but I don't like the background. Maybe use a darker background to make your foreground standout a bit.
     
    Onesite, Sep 12, 2008 IP
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    #17
    Excellent design.The shoutbox colours don't look good though.
     
    rdthewall, Sep 13, 2008 IP
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    #18
    I like the whole site overall loads fast and nice design
     
    Monier, Sep 13, 2008 IP
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    #19
    Good design but not the color.. make it a little darker please to make it catchy.
     
    jorja986, Sep 13, 2008 IP