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Business card contest $20 via paypal -48hrs

Discussion in 'Design Contests' started by proteindude, Sep 5, 2008.

  1. #1
    Hello talented dp folks,

    I need a new business card two sides:

    Colours: I prefer mainly red and white (try and use exclusively red and white)

    Although my logo looks burgundy I want it changed for the design to a red (and white) theme such as the red and white in say coca-cola. The logo can be downloaded from here http://www.sendspace.com/file/v2ktos

    On the front you need to have the logo and company name which is Super Supplements
    Name: Julian BonJovi
    Address: 11/45 Bristol Rd
    Dandenong 3175 VIC
    Tel: (03) 9999 3121
    Fax: (03) 9999 3122
    Email:
    www.supersupplements.com.au

    For the back I prefer my logo and then the following slogan underneath. We sell Australia wide and we are all about achieving a WIN-WIN situation
    Any questions please ask. You can use my red logo on white background or make my logo white and use on red background. Your choice.

    Payment will be made via paypal. I always choose a winner so this is guaranteed.

    Thanks in advance to all interested.
     
    proteindude, Sep 5, 2008 IP
  2. havenalmighty

    havenalmighty Peon

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    #2
    Front and Back.
    Feedback appreciated.
     

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  3. msi52

    msi52 Peon

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    #3
    sent you my entry via PM. Feedback appreciated. Thanks.
     
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  4. RNHalawi.com

    RNHalawi.com Well-Known Member

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    #4
    my entry: (im open for any revision)

    click on the image to see full size
    [​IMG]
     
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  5. watari

    watari Well-Known Member

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    my entry ...

    [​IMG]
     
    watari, Sep 6, 2008 IP
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  6. jamess

    jamess Active Member

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    #6
    my entry

    [​IMG]

    feedback most welcome
     
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  7. proteindude

    proteindude Well-Known Member

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    #7
    havenalmighty: thanks for entering this. I like the back how the s is made really big and it stands out. What you did wrong though is you didn't use a red and white theme (such as say coca-cola) but instead you used some burgundy colours. Also the front one I don't like the black in it that you used for the fonts. I appreciate the entry but I have already some straonger ones.

    msi52: thanks for giving this a go. I find your entry too plain and simple. To be honest I don't really mind simple but plain is something I am not a big fan of.

    RNHalawi: good to see you entering this. As usual great work but not quite there. A pleasant design overall but unless my monitor is wrong there seems to be a white and burgundy scheme as opposed to red and white. Although stylish that combination of two reds is not what I want. I want to use as little variation from red and white as possible. The more I look at the cards I feel like I would prefer more of white on red as opposed to red on white.


    watari: looks really good. My wife likes yours the best so far. I am still undecided but it's looking good

    jamess: good to see you again. I will be very honest. Brutally honest this time ;) Regarding the front: I think it's plain and I don't like plain and yet I like this one. Don't know why but I like it. I just have to think whether it's the right choice as in being the most suitable. Others disagree with me but I really like it. The back side looks really, really good but the only downside with the back is that on my monitor it seems to be slightly silver (as opposed to white) on a burgundy background (as opposed to red)
     
    proteindude, Sep 6, 2008 IP
  8. msi52

    msi52 Peon

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    Thanks for the feedback dude. Will get the revision soon.
     
    msi52, Sep 6, 2008 IP
  9. kerrigan

    kerrigan Greenhorn

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    my entry:

    [​IMG]

    feedback please
     
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  10. proteindude

    proteindude Well-Known Member

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    #10
    kerrigan: thanks for the entry. It's a pleasant one but I am not sure about those circles. They are creative but I don't think they go with the card. Also, I asked for a red and white theme (similar to red and white from coca-cola) but your red (at least on my monitor) looks a little burgundy.
     
    proteindude, Sep 6, 2008 IP
  11. eCovers4uGfx

    eCovers4uGfx Peon

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    Edited: Resent via pm!
     
    eCovers4uGfx, Sep 6, 2008 IP
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  12. proteindude

    proteindude Well-Known Member

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  13. kerrigan

    kerrigan Greenhorn

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    #13
    thanks for feedback

    here are the revised ones:

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  14. havenalmighty

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    #14
    Hmm. Dear Mr. ProteinDude, from what I can see, all of the designs you have considered to be burgundy are actually red. Would you like me to revise my entry anyway? Anything else you want to be played around with?
     
    havenalmighty, Sep 7, 2008 IP
  15. Lokomedia

    Lokomedia Guest

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    i will post in a sec
     
    Lokomedia, Sep 7, 2008 IP
  16. Lokomedia

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  17. proteindude

    proteindude Well-Known Member

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    #17
    kerrigan: thanks for the new submission. It looks good especially the back but the front is unfortunately not my style. In this case I prefer something a little more conservative.

    havenalmighty: Dear Sir/Madam :) I appreciate your entry. Although it has some potential I just happen to like other entries better. Thanks for taking part in this contest.

    THE FINALISTS: as always with my contests I prefer to choose 3 finalists and then let the finalists decide whether they want to do some changes and then I will pick the winner.

    Finalist 1: watari, please change the text on the top one only from black to red. The back doesn't need any changes.

    Finalist 2: jamess, please make the edges to be square as they will be printed with square/sharp/typical edges. The back looks good and just for the front can you please try and make it in reverse. By that I mean see if you can make the text white and place it on a red background.

    Finalist 3: Lokomedia thanks for the submission. Please make the edges square and also change the black to gray/silver on both sides.

    If any of the finalists do not wish to do the changes please indicate here or send me a pm so I know not to expect your changes and then I will pick a winner.

    Thanks again to everyone who participated.
     
    proteindude, Sep 8, 2008 IP
  18. watari

    watari Well-Known Member

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    #18
    update entry ...

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    watari, Sep 8, 2008 IP
  19. jamess

    jamess Active Member

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    #19
    revision as requested

    [​IMG]
     
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  20. Lokomedia

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    Great! Thank you for invitation proteindude :) Heres revised entry

    [​IMG]
     
    Lokomedia, Sep 8, 2008 IP