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Jaffa Cakes

Discussion in 'Websites' started by Alex-Z, Aug 6, 2008.

  1. #1
    Please review my site about jaffa cakes.
    Thanks a lot :)
     
    Alex-Z, Aug 6, 2008 IP
  2. priyakochin

    priyakochin Banned

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    Its too simple.I think it will be good if you add some more picture and all.
     
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  3. ManU2Mech

    ManU2Mech Peon

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    Dude every one expects a photo whenever there's a word cake or bisciut.
    yes u have included the photos but of smaller size, try loading bigger size image with different snaps.
     
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    chaoscript Well-Known Member

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    #4
    like the domain
     
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    deathshadow Acclaimed Member

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    #5
    Serif fonts are more difficult to read in screen media, and lack of spacing between your paragraphs makes it look like one giant run-on. Font sizes are good, but the uber-narrow fixed-width stripe looks kind of childish at higher resolutions - on that count you may want to look into a semi-fluid layout.

    The rounded corners on your boxes could use a bit of anti-aliasing as they are a bit too jagged, some sort of pattern on the background apart from the gradient to 'break things up a bit' would make it look a hair more professional, and if you are going to have multiple pages you should probably have a menu up top instead of inlined in the content text at the bottom.

    Being a new site and so simple, there is no good reason to be throwing a tranny doctype at it - likewise the overabundance of presentational markup, endless redundant classes and unneccessary DIV's, and use of HTML style tags in a XHTML doctype are pretty much made of /FAIL/ - frankly I'm suprised it only has 25 validation errors as I was ballparking double that.

    Not that one expects a whole lot from a turdpress template.
     
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    You should get a more professional template for the site and you should add some graphics to it.
     
    kingofsanda, Aug 7, 2008 IP
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    Hi, thank you all for your help, I've given rep to everyone who helped.
    Thanks very much :)
     
    Alex-Z, Aug 7, 2008 IP
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