Threw this up quickly - what do ya think?

Just chucked this up whilst I develop other sites. May come back to it.

www.helptostopsmoking.com

Any alterations?
Notting

 

looks ok, you could change the color of the bg in the adsense link unit

 

I like the design, simple and clean.

I also like the logo. Is he holding a cigarette?

The only thing I was not sure about was the nav. only being at the bottom of the page.

Very nice site.

 

Nice simple layout. I think you can improve the Adsense ctr by having blue links instead of black.

 

The site goes way of the screen on my 800 X 600 monitor. I can't even view the adsense ads.

 

nice, you should either make some unique articles or do a biger site, cause you won't make much with this..

 

He certainly is the cheeky little devil!

Think you will probably be right on this. Ill get a bit of traffic to it and then mess about

Definately, I only decided to whip it up quickly because of this thread posted two days ago:
http://forums.digitalpoint.com/showthread.php?t=75551

I'm going to work on it a bit more, the overall concept is basically about how giving up smoking is "not about the products that all the firms try to sell to you"

Will def be writing some nice unique stuff on it.

Saw someone else do it on a site here a few days ago and a few members had positive comments on it...we'll see.


Thanks for all your comment, green blobs on the way.
notting

 

heh cool, good luck with the site..

let me know when you're bored of it, if it has some pr I'll buy it

 

Looks good. Like the others have said it could use a splash of color and some more content but great job.

 

Had to laugh at how you got extra keywords in with the -

* friends = help to stop smoking
* activities = help to stop smoking
* hobbies = help to stop smoking
* willpower = help to stop smoking

Hehe.

 

You spotted the key phrase then?! Used rather liberally one might say!

Thanks for your time everyone
Notting

 

Actually would be a funny competition to see who could get the most keywords into a page like that, with it still not breaking the rules.

 

I reckon you could get a scary number of keywords into a page.
titles on everything
alt tag on all images. (lots of very small images)
a page that runs all the way down to the bottom of nowhere (example here: http://www.businessballs.com/salestraining.htm) - ranks for "sales training"!!

Notting

 

You are pulling in goldmine adsense words! I think more images will help, as well as adding a support forum. I like the site mascot alot!

 

if your page is over 50MB, it'll take some time to load