i using article rewriter... please take a look original and not original

Thanks open this thread

i would like to know what you think about this article :-

* Original Article

* Rewrite Article

What you think? Rewrite article is same meaning with original article or not?

please help, i not good in english, so i need your help

thanks

 

The first one is much better. I know it might not have been your intention but thanks for providing a living example of just how NOT effective it is to use an article rewriter/spinner!

 

Nah that's BS. The first sentence is plagiarized.
Do it manually.

 

People tend to believe that rewriting an article is as easy as a piece of cake but nonetheless, it is harder than write an original article if you are heading towards quality.

Even worst, rewriting is often paid cheaper than writing original content.

 

huuhuhu...

sorry i not good in writing, also in english to....

now i need to hire article writer.... but i have a lot PLR article....

 

No need to feel sorry, you are just learning and remember that practice makes master

 

Did anyone even catch the line in the second article about "extramarital sex services?" There's NOTHING in the first article that would even make this re-written line make sense.

As the first commenter mentioned, thank you for providing the perfect example of why article re-writers are worthless pieces of junk.

It's terrible, it doesn't make sense and no one would read that garbage if you paid them. Article spinners are not worth it; pay someone to write the article for you. You'll have a better chance of it making sense that way!

 

Yes, you may have trouble with English, and, yes, the rewrite is NOT good. But I'm having trouble with your abbreviations...what is PLR article?

 

Looks to me as if a human might be needed here, to give it that little extra something - readability for example.
I could suggest an alternative, in fact I've just written a couple of alternatives. But I've deleted them. Why should I help someone who is determined to avoid paying a writer a realistic fee for writing good English?
In my view it's time freelance writers started to protect their interests rather than `being helpful' to people who are trying to steal their income from them.
The OP is obviously from a non-English-speaking country. Do you imagine that he would try to help you, if you tried to start a business in his country that threatened his income? Of course he wouldn't.

 

Your article writer script was drunk when he wrote that.

LMAO!!! See what I mean? Drunk.

 

i suggest you spend your $ on hiring a human writer, buddy.

 

The first is awful. The second is crap. Nuff said.

 

Many "plr rewriters" will sneak in their own links within an article. I would guess that is the case here.

I don't need to add that both articles r crap do i?

 

The first is awful, and the second is nonsense as well as awful.

I've come across the results of article re-writers before, and I can usually tell by the first or second sentence that this has been used. To any native English speaker it stands out like a hippo trying to do ballet.

 

thanks because reply this thread...

and it's give me a lot of experience

PLR Article :- private label rights

 

try to buy original article, believe me, you will get more, like PageRank, SERP and anything

 

yes, now i hire someone to do that...

the article that i post here is not from writer made, but it from re-writer software ...

p/s : i spend $20 to buy that software

 

Well, investment aside, at least you were smart enough to ask for honest feedback before continuing to use poor quality content. So just take it as a lesson learned.

 

yes thank @jhmattern

now i try to re-write by my self using dictionary thesaurus.... what you think about this idea?

still have small problem such grammar....

but i will try, do not give up and still need to learn (read more english article)

 

At first I thought the 1st paragraph was the rewrite because it was so awful - and then I read the second and COULD NOT STOP LAUGHING -

If English was not my first language I would definitely hire someone to write for me, or at least an editor.